Return

She is my air, my soul, my heartbeat, my everything
and she doesn't love me in return
She is my escape, my saving grace, my sunshine, my everything
but she doesn't love me in return
She is my world, my love, my sin, my everything
but she doesn't love me in return.

Reviews

[Jessica Slatton]

Lines 1, 3, and 5 make me think happy thoughts ever time I read them, but then lines 2, 4, and 6 bring me back down. I like how this is written -- with every odd line I believed that it was going to to turn back around and be about love, but it always ended in loss. Very well written.