Spiritual Meaning

My first major writing (done maybe in 5th grade?). Everyone loves it so want to know your guy's opinion.

Light is Love.

And Love is Light.

I walk around the World and fall in Love with Light.

Light is my best friend.

But Light is my worst enemy.

Light is Life.

And Life is Light.

The Grasshopper chirps because of Light.

But the Butterfly dies for Light.

Light is Life.

And Light is Love.

Passion burns in the boy because of Light.

The girl weeps for Light.

Light is everywhere.

But where there is Light there is Darkness.

Darkness is Hate.

And Hate is Darkness.

The flowers wilt because of Darkness.

A volcano erupts because of Darkness.

People die of Darkness.

Evil is born because of Darkness.

And Shadows thrive in Darkness.

The moon is born and dies for Darkness.

Rats live in Darkness.

Souls are collected for Darkness.

Demons kill in Darkness.

People feast in Darkness.

Darkness is Hate.

And Darkness is my friend.

Light is Darkness.

And Darkness is Light.

When Light is born Darkness dies.

When Darkness is born Light dies.

My poem will live forever.

But it shall die in a memory.

If people forget it in my legend then they shall die in the Light.

And the world shall end in Darkness.

Reviews

[GreenSkeleton16]

cool i like the story! makes me wanna write a poem about light and dark now...lol :)