Hero

Holding tight to that rope,
i feel like everything is over.

I see you standing there,
looking at me.

Watching my struggle,
to stay alive.

Why don't you reach down to help,
Why don't you help me.

Slipping from the rope,
Inch by inch,
Closer to the fallen past.

Can your future keep you afloat?

Looking up i see a hand,
Reaching for mine.

It was you!

You had come,
to help me through my struggles.

Grabbing your hand i fel the warmth,
Of your touch.

You were and still are,
My savor.

And my,

HERO!

Author's Note

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

First of all, love the song. Second, I love that you wrote this for your husband; true love is hard to find. I think this is a very deep piece, filled with a lot of power and emotion. A few little grammatical and spelling errors, but nothing a good edit can't fix. Nicely done, I'm sure your husband would be proud :)

[Stella Armour]

how often we need a kind word or a supporting friend and no one is there, no wonder he is your hero ...he pulled you back from then brink and saved you....a lovely tribute to your husband...

[NITHIN PURPLE]

ya...i agree a hero will be a hero for ev'r ..nice lines.......

[Jack...]

A very loving tribute to the man in your lfe. Very nice

[Terohime]

Thanks ^^
~Res

[Inda]

This is beautiful and you paint a vivid picture too; I don't believe you need the song attached to this, but nonetheless great piece!

[Terohime]

Thanks.
~Res

[jacob erin-cilberto]

he had to have been brimming over with good feelings after reading this.

[zainul]

A wonderful write of a woman who depicted wonderful love for her husband.
You have a sacred heart and you are blessed with a sacred heart.
Let your relationship be a perpetual inspiration for us all.

[Krista Weiss]

Aww! Such a great poem!! You must be really lucky to have a husband like that! :)

[KeeD]

A great tribute to an amazing man. Any human that can pick up someone from a difficult place and show them love and light the world has to offer is indeed a hero not only in your eyes but mine. Kudos on a personal yet amazingly inspirational write.

[Terohime]

Thanks ^^
~Res

[Just Kim]

Such a wonderful sweet write,
niely expressed

[Terohime]

Thanks Tabby.
~Res