My dreams

My dreams

A Poem by Terrestrial.42
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This would be my sonnet... it's actually an italian sonnet, which was kind of hard to do.

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My dreams

My dreams resonate with potent visions,
Which take me from my home to distant stars.
I see lands lost to time: earth’s faded scars,
And future’s cities among the heavens.

Some nights the ocean’s whispering deafens,
On others I strain to hear the pulsars’.
Often I’ll walk the red surface of Mars,
Edge its canyons until my pulse quickens.

Although my night wand’rings are breathtaking,
Eventually they come to a close:
My mind is pulled, unwilling, to waking,
Where I’m confined to muscles aching,
And feeble efforts to translate in prose
Pictures whose colours are slowly flaking.


© 2010 Terrestrial.42



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Completely agree with Lilith. Did you do this for a class or did you just want to do a sonnet? well, if it was for class I think you deserve all the points possible.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lovely poem!
I cannot find any flaws in it; it's just beautiful.
Keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Terrestrial.42
Terrestrial.42

Niagara, Canada



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