Comfortable Silence

Comfortable Silence

A Poem by Creepy Swine Guy




Our silence needn't be awkward, for

there is joy in your mere presence,

contentment in just sharing your air.


We don't need to find words to fill any void.

Because with you, there is no void, no

reason to search awkwardly for words.


So sit ... share this space with me.

Quiet has never been any kind of sin.

Put your hand on mine and smile.


I'll remember that sunset, that

walk on the beach, that quiet dinner

or any one of a million quiet moments.


We don't need words and never have.

Just hold my hand and let me breathe your

air. Just sit with me and love me.

© 2014 Creepy Swine Guy


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beautiful...has such a peaceful feel. I like the acceptance of it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Comfortable silences can say so much! Like the subject of this poem very much. So much power in being together and just "being". That tells me a lot about a relationship, far more than words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really lovely!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A true connection need no words, and as your title declares, there is comfort in silence, a space where just being will suffice. Beautifully written...

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Swiney, I hereby declare that forever more your new moniker shall be fuzzy bunny guy. bury the pork bones and cheers to the rabbit! :) Now quit twitching your nose at me, and admit you have a soft spot a mile wide.

Loved this!



Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Creepy Swine Guy

11 Years Ago

I'd clearly been under the influence of something vile.
oh, these are sweet, sweet words

i should send you some gingerbread

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Emily B

11 Years Ago

did you get it yet?
Creepy Swine Guy

11 Years Ago

[Checks mailbox] .... no not yet
Emily B

11 Years Ago

maybe the mailman ate them :)

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