Rhetorical!

Rhetorical!

A Poem by Creepy Swine Guy
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Just another sappy love poem.

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You cannot feel the pounding ache that courses through

every fiber of my heart when you are far from me.

You cannot conceive of the countless times that you take
ownership of my thoughts in even a single minute.


You cannot know the torrents of happiness that
you unleash when you deign, merely to say "Hello."


You cannot know how pitifully lacking are those thought
most beautiful of our time, when compared to you.

So when I ask you if you know how much I love you, Don't answer.
Don't say "Yes". You cannot possibly know how much I love you!

Just smile that most perfect of smiles, look at me with those, the
most stunning of eyes, and tell me that you'll never leave me!







© 2013 Creepy Swine Guy


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The impact the people we love is seldom subtle. This is beautifully written. Worthy of a Valentine Poem to present to that special someone.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Creepy Swine Guy

11 Years Ago

That'd be Shelby. she's half Yello Lab and half Chow.
icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

My sweet pea's name is bella- she's part pit and god knows what else.
True it is that no one ever knows the extent of true love that we feel in our hearts for another being. They think they know and we think they know but no one actually really knows at all. The flow here was perfect as was the subject. Fantastically portrayed.
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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so beautiful and sincere. really, really fine!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww...she is a very lucky woman. Beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I was expecting a 'creepy' voice, not a sensitive read from Swine Guy! Kudos. ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha, you telling me you're faking it?! ;-P
Creepy Swine Guy

11 Years Ago

I'm telling you that the wrapping is the thinnest and most insubstantial part of every package ... i.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

No argument with you there hon....but I still think you're a good person, no matter what you say!!
bravo!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Creepy Swine Guy

11 Years Ago

Thank you Tam
Fuzzy Bunny Guy strikes again! A most beautiful write Swiney! Your reputation is gonna be all shot to hell now. This is just too lovely for mere words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Creepy Swine Guy

11 Years Ago

Hush you. You're gonna ruin my rep!
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Eve
omg, you ol' softie! What a beautiful gift to your hearts desire! may she always smile and nod knowingly!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Creepy Swine Guy

11 Years Ago

[Smile] turns out ... she barks.
LA Lorena

11 Years Ago

I knew it!!!!!!
Eve

11 Years Ago

hahaha it's your cutie, she's a sweetie for sure.
Well this is inspired!...how wonderfully fulfilling it would be to garner such affection, to be able to uncurl that tightly held fist and come inside. this is enough to make someone's heart stop... and then run wild.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Kristina Moulaison

11 Years Ago

That's a very cool little widget you have there. I made a couple sound recordings but I don't know .. read more
Creepy Swine Guy

11 Years Ago

Thx :)

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