Sign

Left

in the lurch

           

            Time

       flies

                        Bye

            Free for

the taking

                        But

Words fail

of their own account

            To redeem

               Themselves

                   In the

            Wake

            Of their

binding reality

Reviews

[Emily Quinn]

This is very soft, almost elegant, the structure only adds to the echoic words. Beautiful poem

[S. Michael Long]

i really love this.. i especially love your form!