Isn't it Grand?

Love is so easily shattered isn't it? But I won't let that happen, we'll be together forever, just like you wanted. We'll never leave each other. Isn't it grand?

I love you and you love me right? Since the moment we met we've been together. Never leaving each other, not letting go, never holding back. 

I cage you with my heart allowing you no freedom without me by your side. Of course you don't mind. You've bound me in your own chains of lust; we're perfect together. Isn't it grand?

The pain I give you and the pleasure you give me. We're perfect together, made for one another. Your screams of agony take over me, your possessed with your own sadistic want.

I scar you with my mark every night, you the same to me. We kill each other slowly, painfully, full of pleasure and insanity. We know not of reason or restraint when the moon rises with our hunger. All we crave, all we need, want, desire, is each other.

Of course all good things come to an end; during one night when we were wrapped in the bindings of our passion we realized this couldn't last forever. So we fought. We bloodied one another in anger mixed with obsession.

Our bond grew ever stronger as my hands wrapped around your scarred neck, yours doing the same. With the knife I used to carve my name into your very soul I pierced your heart.

I carved it out of your chest and took it lovingly into my hands, how beautiful it was. Though it no longer would beat for me I cherished it with my own, clutching tightly in my grasp never to let it go.

Laying beside your pale corpse I whisper to you. "Our love will last forever, you will always be with me and I you. We got what we wanted." the knife lay by my side, I grabbed it, pulling it close to my face to look into my reflection through your blood.

Oh how it shone, my face in your blood, the beauty of it all. I lowered it to my wrists and began carving your name into my very bone, the blood flowing like a never ending waterfall as I carved into the next wrist.

Surrounding us, our blood mixed together, becoming one huge crimson pool enveloping us in our passion.

As my body went numb and darkness began to creep into my vision I turned to your lifeless body caressing your face with your heart clutched to my chest.

Before slipping away to join you in the dark abyss I whisper one last thing to you. "Isn't it Grand?" 

Reviews

[What happened to simple..]

Bloody hell this is Awesome! I was half expecting some standard love poem, sweet blah blah, I was wrong - and I'm glad. By the way, it was rather grand ;)

Just, ah, the obsessive, neurotic inner feelings of every relationship, the devilish desires you have in your mind - what would happen if they left, fantasty, fiction, but nevertheless, the thought is that. Brilliantly executed.

[E.J.Byrnes]

Very beautiful. Just my cup of tea! Nudge me when you post up more of your gorgeous work :)

[S. Walden]

I really liked this, especially for my contest. It had the theme and how I expected it to be, although I think it needs more description :) Keep up the awesome work

[Lazy Dragon]

This was very good. Somewhat dark and entrancing, it really keeps you thinking. It borders the line between love and obsession, nicely as well. I certainly wasn't expecting the sadistic edge, but it fit. Keep it up!