Burning Sky

Inspired by the song "Shadow of the Day" by Linkin Park

Igniting the clouds,
The sunset appears.
Why must it glow like this?
One last hurrah before death?
Or is it crying out?
Casting its last tendrils of colored light
To find a person who cares enough to save it
Shouting "Look at me! I'm dying here!"
Either way, who would have thought
That something so terrible could look so beautiful.

Author's Note

I still might expand this poem, once I get more ideas.

Reviews

[sentimental~ galore]

Firstly good use of inspiration through Linkin park song, and exteremly expressive and powerful even though your making simple statements. You used a good sentence structure, i liked the simple elaboration of the whole thought. nicely done.

[HorrorMaster]

very good poem

[Nirganzerix]

The metaphor of the sunset as a death is rather dark. I never saw it that way. But my own philosophies should not come into a review, I suppose. I like this poem quite a bit, although it seems rather concise. And something seems off about it, but I can't put my finger on it. I suppose it just feels too short. Good job though!

[KAREN]

This poem is beautiful. I love the sun rise and sun set! The imagery is great, never thought about the sun setting means it's dying , but it could be but is reborn the next evening. Lovely poem!

[Zachary_James]

Wow, I am shocked at how well you rote this i pictured what i was reading in my head. This poem was so well written. Well done

[Coyote Poetry]

If we would listen to nature. She would be asking us for help. In your short poem you said a hand full. We need to appreciate and protect what is left of Nature before it is too late to turn back. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Red Brick Keshner]

Quite expandable... there are several many avenues you may choose to explore here. Who would think, the sun, so powerful and strong- the source of energy and life on this planet would need help, need saving. Such an intriguing approach to the theme.

[Marlena]

I think you shold expand it, but not the end. Maybe add something to the middle, I feel it's missing something, but the ending you've got is perfect for the poem. Good work ^_^

[Dreamer<3]

You could expand it, but I think it's wonderful how it is. Truly amazing, actually. I really love it. Great job!

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

I love this! incredible thing i never saw before. I love linkin park and this song is one of my favorites. U are amazing i hope to read more.