Eyes Like Glass

Eyes Like Glass

A Poem by TheLastEclipse
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A song about finding hope in love

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Shaking, you are.
Worried so far.
My eyes will water. Alone we sit.
Voices echo to each wall.
Using it as a masquerade for them all.
Together we sit alone.
With two souls connected, 
I've never felt so empty.
With one eye staring into another.
Blue to green.
Your eyes make me believe.
That glass couldn't touch my flesh again.
As a blade reaches my skin,
the flesh begins to rise,
trying its best to hide all the fear.
My lips cannot lie,
with you alone I cry.
Kissing as we reach the edge.
And then the white becomes red.
The love for you within is dead.
Why can't I sing,
Why can't I sing?
With you! (For you)
Why can I fade?
Why die today?
When we all have so much to live for!
With eyes like glass!
Yours as green as the grass.
A blade shall not be present.
The mistake is taken back,
our chapped lips shall not crack,
as we begin to touch them...
You surely can touch them.
Look at me, 
with the eyes of glass.
Cutting deep into my heart.
We'll never be apart...
Surely we can touch them.

© 2012 TheLastEclipse


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Very sad yet good poem keep on penning.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is haunting man. If I understand the metaphor correctly the eyes are like glass in that the are "see through" and "cut in to you" in a sense yes?

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Words

11 Years Ago

wow this is mysteriously great, interest, you say your a christian thats great l am too.
TheLastEclipse

11 Years Ago

Hey man, that is great. Thank you for the compliment. I will be watching you closely to assure it lo.. read more
Words

11 Years Ago

no problem, we need to be our brothers keeper, we can't make it alone. I wrote two pieces would like.. read more

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TheLastEclipse
TheLastEclipse

Crossville, AL



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I have been writing since the age of twelve and have been creating oral tales since before that. I am a Christian but have a twisted way in some of my stories. I write poetry, stories, and I'm a cas.. more..

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