I will be here for you forever

I will be here for you forever

A Poem by TheLostMind
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I have a friend.. far far away.. She is suffering.. fighting for what she believes in.. From here, all I can give is hope.. words of support...

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** Prologue **

I once knew a girl... beautiful and clever
With deep brown eyes... that could pierce me like  a spear


Now she is suffering....  fighting for a lost cause
Hanging on to memories.... of love that was. .


Her absence.. it makes me quiver. .
More than her tears... it's her silence that I fear.


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You will not  be alone,  never. ..
I will be here for you forever. .


If there ever comes a day.
Filled with sadness, or with fear. .
Remember,  I will be here for you forever. 


If life pulls you down. . 
Don't shed a tear. .
Just remember,  your friend will be here for you.. forever. .


Time will fly by...
And you will forget me my dear. .
Yet,  I will be here for you.. forever. .


When Time comes calling. .
And my end is near. .
I will have a smile on my face. .
I was here for you.. forever. 


© 2015 TheLostMind



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I admire how you care for your friend. And your promise to be there for her forever- that was so awesome. She is so lucky to have you, yet it seems it's different when you are not with her. It's different when you can actually lean on one's shoulder, hold his hand, cry in his presence, and listen to his words.
Hope she feels better.
Well-written poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheLostMind

2 Years Ago

Thank you Dhaye, for this awesome review. You have indeed captured the essence of my poem in your re.. read more
Dhaye

2 Years Ago

My pleasure.
felioness

1 Year Ago

This struck a cord In me when I was reading it. .. especially the refrain. It works well with this .. read more



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With the right notes, this could
Translate well into a song
I like the pause before never..you
Could repeat this line too

Posted 2 Months Ago


The essence of true friendship is very appreciated here. Also the rhyming and the well crafted verses. I must say you have a way with words.

Posted 3 Months Ago


TheLostMind

3 Months Ago

Thank you. Your encouraging words are much appreciated
DIVYA

3 Months Ago

Its a pleasure.
My husband promised me forever, but God took him any way. We never know how long a life will last. Valentine

Posted 10 Months Ago


So graciously written. So touching to know that someone will be there regardless of what is going on. You are so poetic. I hope you are not sad, you are so talented. That is a gift you know, not to be taken lightly. Not all can do what you do and have the mind for it. Unconditional love is what is going on and that's something to behold. Bravo! Blessings, Kyam

Posted 2 Years Ago


TheLostMind

2 Years Ago

Thank you for this kind and generous review. I am not sad.. :) .. You will always be happy if you a.. read more
I loved your poem and I thought it was very awesome I encourage you to keep writing. I hope that you can keep writing poems and I love you poems and no matter what I will love you poems forever.

Posted 2 Years Ago


TheLostMind

2 Years Ago

Thank you :). I am glad you liked this one :)..
Kafka On the Shore is one of my favourite books. As I read this I really wished that someone would someday tell these lines to me. Your friend is indeed lucky to have you by her side. "More than her tears its her silence that I fear"- I liked this line the best. You know, sometimes, tears flow out of people in the form of silence. There are many who drown their sorrows in silence. Sometimes tears and silence are one and the same.
Bless this girl and may she be happy.

Posted 2 Years Ago


TheLostMind

2 Years Ago

And someone will ma'am :).. It's all about waiting for the right day.. Ya, that line means a lot to .. read more
Isabel25

2 Years Ago

You are most welcome :D
I admire how you care for your friend. And your promise to be there for her forever- that was so awesome. She is so lucky to have you, yet it seems it's different when you are not with her. It's different when you can actually lean on one's shoulder, hold his hand, cry in his presence, and listen to his words.
Hope she feels better.
Well-written poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheLostMind

2 Years Ago

Thank you Dhaye, for this awesome review. You have indeed captured the essence of my poem in your re.. read more
Dhaye

2 Years Ago

My pleasure.
felioness

1 Year Ago

This struck a cord In me when I was reading it. .. especially the refrain. It works well with this .. read more
Its true dedication dear poet. The sentiments here are enough to break a heart of granite and reduce it to a once more beating flesh vessel of love. This is a beacon for her to find her way. The words are those of a good friend. This is very good.
:))

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheLostMind

2 Years Ago

Thanks for this amazing review Anto. I really mean it.. Loved this review. Thanks again :)
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A heartfelt poem with strong promises. What happened to her? Is she better? A wonderful friend she has in you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


TheLostMind

2 Years Ago

She doesn't want me to help her. Not sure if she is better.. Thanks for stopping by Miss D.
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2 Years Ago

Ahhh too bad :(
TheLostMind

2 Years Ago

Right :( ...
Great work my friend, I hope she finds the peace and solace she needs as soon as possible. You are a great friend to have connected and penned this piece, the honesty of its intention is bare-boned and beautiful. cheers

Posted 2 Years Ago


TheLostMind

2 Years Ago

Thank you Roshan. :). Wasn't sure how this poem was going to be accepted. . :0

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