Deluge

Deluge

A Poem by TheMalady
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I made this out of reverie to my current book, The Time Traveler. This piece holds a meaning - a hidden message, to my characters.

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Pray through the great halls where thy Gods and Goddesses dwell,

''Till Venus ascends the white stairs; before thy black capes fill.

'Of thy satires and symphonies drifting along Mt. Olympus,

'May thy eyes and lips speak of thy commoners' bleats.'


'Thy Sun-God blazes hither, its fire burning,

'Though Justice didst thy venture, desecrating,

'For, hullo! Thou Zealots, with thy fists and lips,

'Feast on vines and wines - curtains o'er thy eyes.'


'At last! Thy dawn shall cast thy away!'

'Scavengers, bow thy head! For God-Light shall play!'

'Vulture, soar up! Curse, thy dark path!

'Conquer! Suffer! Taste thy gavel of wrath!





© 2016 TheMalady



Author's Note

TheMalady
I just thought of writing something old. This is an experiment. I am curious of your thoughts regarding this one. :)

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this seems a very difficult sort of poem to attack. a very strong command of language is clearly necessary, a gift that I myself do not have. I do love poetry, but could not use wording that is so...I don't know how to put it other then mythical in feel. I would love to say I was entirely clear on the whole thing, but I got a little confused. was the sun god giving justice to the night and telling it to feast on wine, so his light could shine in the morn? do tell me if I am off base, because the words were so beautiful, I want to make sure I haven't misconstrued anything.

well written, I really enjoyed this epic piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheMalady

1 Year Ago

Yes, that's correct. This is actually a poem I've written to attack some bad people, so this is just.. read more
jesserose99

1 Year Ago

oh, well I have to read time traveler some time, as I did enjoy the mood of this. thank you for tel.. read more
TheMalady

1 Year Ago

You're right. Well, I am not yet ready with the Time Traveler story. I am planning of rewriting the .. read more



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I liked the poem. Filled with strength and energy. You left visions and thoughts for the reader. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheMalady

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much for the review! I really appreciate the time you took for this one. Thanks a lot.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
TheMalady

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot! Your time for reading this is just awesome! :)
Very powerfully done. keep experimenting.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheMalady

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much! Your review will keep me fired up in writing. :)
this seems a very difficult sort of poem to attack. a very strong command of language is clearly necessary, a gift that I myself do not have. I do love poetry, but could not use wording that is so...I don't know how to put it other then mythical in feel. I would love to say I was entirely clear on the whole thing, but I got a little confused. was the sun god giving justice to the night and telling it to feast on wine, so his light could shine in the morn? do tell me if I am off base, because the words were so beautiful, I want to make sure I haven't misconstrued anything.

well written, I really enjoyed this epic piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheMalady

1 Year Ago

Yes, that's correct. This is actually a poem I've written to attack some bad people, so this is just.. read more
jesserose99

1 Year Ago

oh, well I have to read time traveler some time, as I did enjoy the mood of this. thank you for tel.. read more
TheMalady

1 Year Ago

You're right. Well, I am not yet ready with the Time Traveler story. I am planning of rewriting the .. read more

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