Never Lasting Words

Something I wrote on the spot. Boredom took over as I was listening to music :D YES, I do realize that this may not be true, but I thought I'd try this out.

 

Never Lasting Words

 

The past is gone

Yet it still disturbs me

Time stands still

But it flies by in a blink

Friends stay by your side

Then they leave unexpectedly

Love is powerful when found

But agonizing when it’s lost

Dreams are beautiful and extensive

However, they always die away

Songs bring delight when they start

Soon after they fade out

A kiss so passionate

Will always end

The warmest embrace

Never lasts forever

Sweet, meaningful words

Come to a close sooner or later

This beautiful planet we live in

Won’t be around perpetually

All of this, true as can be

Even though it hurts, you surely must see

Don’t fret or pay no mind

Because everything will start over

This poem, with little words

Is going to conclude

But believe me when I say

There will be more soon

Author's Note

Foget about the grammar issues and incorrect spellings. Just give me your opinion!

Reviews

[Alice Oiseau]

Oh! A paradoxical poem! I love it.
Each statement is contradictory to the previous one, but they all hold a truth that as we continue our journey through life, we live and experience these paradoxes first hand.
Beautiful writing, with a hint of nostalgia, creating a charming cadence for the poem itself.
Cheers.

[deeps]

Very insightful read.
I agree with what you are saying here.
This is well written and put together.
I never look for the gammar problems or speelings
as long as it comes from the heart that is what matters
awesome read.

[Carrie Montgomery]

I think Alice Oiseau said it all in the review she gave you...wonderful play on words, great title. Poem draws you in and keeps you reading, great rhythm , nice strong finish. Poem stays even and strong throughout.

[Vaishali..^_^]

this is very beautiful...!i love this....!very well written!
great work...!

[R J Askew]

I like it. The title drew me to read. I sometimes hate words as I think they use us, they get us to write them and then mock us. And if they are any good they will live beyond us. But of course most will not. I like the way your poem says some very plain truths. Esp the lines about the song and the kiss. And yes we and this planet will be no more one day. We think this a great sadness. But is it? Perhaps accepting that it is not will make our lot a little easier.

[Havatara]

It's a beautiful poem, and I especially love the first four lines. You shoule write more poems like it!

[Wunderlich]

Written very well. I like the form it is written in and the diction used. Just an all around awesome poem. Nice job :D

[Tiana]

A wonderfully written insightful poem, Veronica ... hugs - Bree

[Last Lying Look]

I actually LOVE this!
I agree with this entire piece completely.
It's brilliantly written & well put together.
I love this style of writting.
Amazing.
I'm adding this to my favorites.
-Elissa

[Voice]

That was beautiful me crying boo. I love it so much there is so much I could say about this. It is so true and it portrays the never ending circle. This is a great poem that I really really really love and because I want you to get a lot of points thats how good it is im just gonna keep writing and hope you dont mind cause I dont know how long this will be before I stop typing. I think this will get you a few points so im gonna end this...now. Oh I lied...

Voice/u know who