Preview of Cumming Attractions

Preview of Cumming Attractions

A Story by The Nude Writer
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A young virgin has his first experience in a dorm shower

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Geoffrey was your typical College Freshman. Young, naive, a bit too skinny, inexperienced, and horny as f**k. He had managed to avoid sex throughout secondary school, although not by choice. He was awkward around girls and lacked the fortitude to bed one anyway. The only sexual partner he was brave enough to make love to was his right hand and a Playboy magazine he stole from his friend's house. He masturbated a lot and furiously. He imagined how it would be to f**k one of the naked models in the magazine. Just blast her with his erect c**k, show no mercy, make her scream. All he knew about sex he learned from porn, so he had no concept of romance, foreplay, and taking it slow. He always imagined he would just come into a girl's room, exchange a look, bend her over her desk and just f**k her mercilessly. 
That's what he was thinking about when he went into his dorm's shower room late on a Friday night and started masturbating. He almost always showered late at night. Although his dorm had private curtained shower stalls, he still didn't feel comfortable being around other guys in a towel. Somebody did poor Geoffrey wrong growing up that he would fear his naked body so much, especially because he had a well sized dick. Not like a horses's c**k, but flaccid he hung at a good 6 inches and erect he stood an impressive 9.5 with girth. 
His penis was the one part of his body that he appreciated. As he rubbed his soapy hand up and down his engorged shaft and over his slightly purple head he thought about how much any girl would love to take his whole length deep inside her p***y, her mouth, or even her a*s. Wherever he instructed her to take it. Yes, Geoffrey liked this idea as he handled his sword of hardened flesh. 
He picked up the pace of his self pleasure and tightened his grip. He was really feeling it and his mind was deep in fantasy. Eyes closed, one hand stroking, the other hand cupping his rounded balls. Feeling the bust of semen coming soon, he lets out a audible moan. 
"Who is that?" A female voice breaks his concentration. There is a girl in the boys shower room. All sorts of embarrassing thoughts slam into Geoffrey's mind. Had he been caught by a girl? His image has been tarnished. Caught masturbating in the shower. Everyone will know and the ridicule will be unending. 
"Hello? Who's in there?" The voice comes again. 
He cant hide that someone is there. The water is running and he clearly let out a very identifiable moan of pleasure. He just kept quiet, hand still firmly grasping his now weakening member. Hoping this girl will just go away.
A set of red painted nails slowly curve around the edge of the shower curtain and it quickly opens. 
There standing is a beautiful redhead in a terrycloth white robe. Bare feet and piercing eyes which did not look shocked but curious as they panned down to his c**k still in his grasp. 
She smiles, gives a shoulder shrug, and opens her robe removing it and then hanging it on the hook just outside as she stepped into the shower and drew the curtain closed. The sultry red head stood naked in front of the quivering nervous Geoffrey. 
Her fiery hair lay over her shoulders pointing towards her pale round breasts and dark pointy n*****s that sagged to the outside just slightly. Her genital area was adorned by a light covering of soft red hair and a little trail leading up to her navel. She was a little on the plump side with a slight belly and a curvy bottom and hips. She caught Geoffrey's eyes as they inspected her from her fiery crotch to her beautiful plump breasts and back to her face which he was having trouble focusing on being still nervous. 
She laughed slightly as his clear unease and looked down at his semi-hard c**k and smiled. Without any words she placed her hands on his hips and pressed her body into his giving him a deep tongue kiss. backing him up against the shower wall. Geoffrey now feeling a bit more comfortable kissed her back. Feeling her force up against him, he didn't think he could push her away even if he wanted to. 
Their passionate kiss continued when Geoffrey felt this mystery woman's hand now on his penis. Simply holding it, but the feeling was amazing. She broke this kiss to give him a look. as to say "Do I have to do all the work?" Geoffrey got the message and cupped one of her breasts in his hand. They were soft but firm and provided a little resistance when he squeezed. 
Now she was stroking his c**k and it started getting harder again. She looked down amazed how much it had grown and continued. His erection at full stand made it difficult for them to remain close together so she decided it was time to move. 
The red haired woman gave Geoffrey one more deep kiss before lowering herself to her knees. Looking up and licking the head of his penis with her pink tongue. Geoffrey shivered and almost fell back but managed to stay standing. She smiled and gave his c**k another lick and then another. She leaned in and started softly kissing his shaft starting at the base and working her way to the tip before sliding half of it into her mouth. Geoffrey couldn't believe this new feeling. This was way better than anything he had ever done to himself. His strength waning he leaned back against the shower wall as the Redhead continued sucking on his erect c**k. 
She took him deeper and deeper until her soft red lips were almost at the base of his shaft. He didn't know how she was able to take him so deep, but he loved that she could. 
Geoffrey also didn't know how long he could last. For him masturbation had always been about speed. Wanting to finish quickly before anyone caught him. He wanted to go longer but he started feeling the familiar sensation of a hot load of cum churning in his balls and working its way up his shaft. 
The Redhead sensed this and looked up towards him with sad eyes that begged him not to, but also confirming that she was ready for him to burst. She popped his c**k out of her mouth and then started working his shaft with one hand while squeezing his balls with the other. She gave his sensitive head quick licks and pops with her mouth keeping her eyes focused intently on him waiting and hoping for the flow of semen. Geoffrey let out a moan and a loud one at that, he didnt care now who heard him. He closed his eyes and braced himself against that wall. Hot white cum exploded from the end of his c**k and the Redhead gladly caught it on her eager tongue. Spurt after spurt of milky spunk, she continued to pump his manly sword, drinking it all up. 
When his orgasm subsided she gave it one more deep suck making sure he was spent, then she swallowed, stood up and showed Geoffrey her immaculate pink tongue now clean of semen. 
The Redhead now with her task completed smiled and kissed Geoffrey deep giving his penis one more squeeze before exiting the shower, putting on her robe and leaving the room. 
Geoffrey continued to shower still in awe of what just happened. It felt like a dream, but it was a good dream. He never got her name, but he prayed she would find him again. He needed to find her again. 
After he found his strength he shut off the water and reached for his robe. In the pocket was a note which read.

"When you are ready for another go, cum to Baker House: Room 21. -Red"

© 2017 The Nude Writer



Author's Note

The Nude Writer
Tell me what you think. I have never written exactly like this before. This is the first chapter of my new erotic anthology. More to come :)

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You did well. You create strong characters and interesting story line. Fantasy and wish is part of the all of us. The story had a happy ending for the young man. I believe written and realistic. Thank you for sharing your always entertaining work.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Nude Writer

10 Months Ago

Thank you dear :) Im glad you enjoyed it
Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

A well-written tale. It had real life feel. You are welcome dear Poet.



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I think I'd like to use it as part of my fantasies. thanks for writing it.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Nude Writer

2 Weeks Ago

My pleasure! Thanks for reading
This got my 'blood up'...among other things. Extremely enjoyable and extremely erotic.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


The Nude Writer

2 Weeks Ago

We'll thank you :)
Erotic, sensitive and with great insight. A nicely constructed scenario with tasteful sex even if explicit.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


This was sensational... You did not let up all the way through and kept the erotic electricity buzzing. I enjoyed the read from fantasy to reality - though let's face it, the whole thing is a dream!

I'm ready for another go!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Loved the way you told this story. I like your style a lot and will be reading more.

Posted 6 Months Ago


The Nude Writer

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)
Very good descriptions of G and Red and even better erotic description of the encounter. I really like it and definitely could relate to G being a freshmen and a virgin. Arousing tale

Posted 6 Months Ago


Reads very much like a wet dream brought to life. I like the fantasy vs reality aspect.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Nude Writer

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much! Yes, that was my intention :)
It was very nice. Brought me back to another time in my life

Posted 9 Months Ago


I really enjoyed this story. Not trying to be overly crude but I'd imagine it give a lot of us readers a good erotic story to get off on. Who wouldn't want this to happen to them? I liked the realistic view and I look forward to reading into your stories soon to come.

Posted 10 Months Ago


You did well. You create strong characters and interesting story line. Fantasy and wish is part of the all of us. The story had a happy ending for the young man. I believe written and realistic. Thank you for sharing your always entertaining work.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Nude Writer

10 Months Ago

Thank you dear :) Im glad you enjoyed it
Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

A well-written tale. It had real life feel. You are welcome dear Poet.

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Added on January 21, 2017
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I am a proud nudist and writer. I live naked and my spirit is naked to the world. I don't hide much and tell it like it is. I write about the human body, nudism, being a woman and other topics. .. more..

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