Beneath the light

In the core of your innermost fantasies

lies an alluring truth

where all the beauty of this world unveils

in this deeply seductive journey that unfolds...

 

Listen to the whispers of the lost

let them lead you to those far away lands

and I promise you won't forget

you won't regret...

 

Run through the darkwoods

against the wrath of the waves

and let the air brush against your face,

the breeze of a vision coming to life

 

Mysterious motives and incoherent patterns

Little did we know of what lies beneath the light...

 

Captivated by the unknown

swallowed by the abyss of infinity

Feel the thrill...

 

Anywhere but here,

this world so cruel and dull...

 

Amazing places await you stranger...

Just close your eyes,

you'll be where you wanna be...

Where you belong...

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Aven]

the first stanza really inspired me, it felt as if the beginning of a fairytale, or perhaps an epic...I really enjoyed the read. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

this takes you on a journey that at anytime you can escape the hectic or mundane lives we lead. all we have to do is close our eyes and use our imaginations and go where ever we want. This poem makes us think of those days when we were small children and would do this all the time. Great story you have told in this poem.

[FocusedAmnesia]

The the use of words in this piece. It read so well. The imagery is amazing.

[SilentDreamer]

I agree with both Getthehellout and Skelasoldier. Great job.

[Skelasoldier]

This is a very good poem with alot of imagitory language, you dont see that in many poems, good job :)