Endless

Endless

A Poem by TheOther

Soothing breeze and tranquil waters.
Warm and calm to embrace me.
Falling deeper in,
breathing in a new sequence.

Dazzling, surreal beautiful asymmetry.
Mesmerising highlights.
Endless acceleration of shapes.
A world dipped in colour.

Serenity.
Melting into the dream scape.
Reformed, reborn.
The way it used to be, as it is now.

Flowing figures, pictures, motion.
Emotion, beyond my notion.
Swapping dimensions.
Altered perceptions.

Spiralling in and out, my will shifts
in misty sceneries of a forsaken past.

Every little detail's coming to life,
to entice me, abiding.

Sinking in, with no regrets.
A world made of silk and velvet
Washing the pain away in pale silence.
Treating me with visual delights.

A new self to collect.
With traits I never dreamed of.
Breaking through the lifetimes,
a multiple existence.

A limitless chaos, a countless freedom.

Unfolded wings, taking off into the arms of eternity.
There is no distance, the gap is bridged,

as soon as you take the first step...


You are there and nothing else matters.

Unleashed, evolving, transforming.

Sinking into the void, the journey is endless,
only if you chose it to be so...

© 2011 TheOther


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your word structure and metaphors are flawless and absolutely stunning in their capacity to create a cinematic screen in front of the reader splashing all the gorgeous hues of this moving poetic in vivid three dimensional emotional images~ felt almost like the dawn of time at her first exhale through creation~

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reading this feels like being born again

Posted 8 Years Ago


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. sounds like an amazingly beautiful ode to evolution ...


Posted 8 Years Ago


Hello Christina,

My favorite Greek Author, it has been far too long since I have allowed myself to ride the waves of your elegance and beauty. With words that is. You have me spellbound and speechless, this by far a fantastic poem and one of my new favorites.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a wonderful process of observing existence!
A beautiful poem! Rebirth through realisation!
Wonderful piece of writing
xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, your pictures of emotion are perfect ... leading us down the path of change.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

your word structure and metaphors are flawless and absolutely stunning in their capacity to create a cinematic screen in front of the reader splashing all the gorgeous hues of this moving poetic in vivid three dimensional emotional images~ felt almost like the dawn of time at her first exhale through creation~

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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TheOther

Nicosia, Cyprus



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I'm Christina Christodoulou at the age of 17. My native language is Greek and I live in Cyprus. Awards: Red Instinct Award (5th) Aug 13, 2010 * The Thanatos Award Contest * Beneath.. more..

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