Wondering thoughts

Thinking at night.
Wondering if im alright.
Despite of all the hard times .
The signs that I'm giving you.
I still want you to see between the lines
And Climb the vines to my mind and understand what i go though.
People throw my happiness away.
Its like all I see is gray and I feel like I'm fading away..

Reviews

[Krizito]

I like how you kind of captured your feelings, your words were quite powerful. But I kind of feel it needs quite a bit of trimming, some lines are quite a mouthful. Good write-up!

[onmyway]

I like what you've written - its like an honest expression of your heart!! Liked the line "climb the vines to my mind"..