Loving Hatred

Loving Hatred

A Poem by Silent Raven

My heart beats for one

But belongs to two

One loves me dearly

One hates what I do

I want to love the one

Who loves me for me

But I can’t set the one

Who hates me free

I crave the hatred

That is aimed at my being

I’m long ago gone

Sanity’s essence fleeing

I need your cold heart

I need the pain

I need your sadism

To drive me insane

I close my eyes and

Ice from your mouth drips

I wake up screaming

With your name on my lips

I hate what you do to me

There is nothing to gain

But now I’m in love

And I won’t be the same.

© 2012 Silent Raven


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AK
Wow! I think it is amazing! I really liked the fact that you incorporated a rhyming scheme in your poem. It makes it more interesting and enhances the flow. The first line was very nice and urged me to read more. The title was simply exquisite. Beautiful topic to write about. You ended the poem perfectly. Great write!
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Posted 12 Years Ago


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This poem was very well done. With short sentences it creates vivid images and strong emotions. It's easy to read and has excellent flow.. My only question is the identity of the recipients of your love. And for me, personally, I don't enjoy poems, books, music or movies with dark, negative themes. There are many other good and positive choices that we can make. But, that's my opinion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


WoW simply amazing here! Love your flow and rhyme scheme.
This really stands out. I enjoyed this alot!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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AK
Wow! I think it is amazing! I really liked the fact that you incorporated a rhyming scheme in your poem. It makes it more interesting and enhances the flow. The first line was very nice and urged me to read more. The title was simply exquisite. Beautiful topic to write about. You ended the poem perfectly. Great write!
~Improve Your Writing group, reading group writings~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh wow that is good Cheeka! I like it! You are a good writter! you know that?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Standing O! Good read, well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Silent Raven
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