Story Line

In every story, there’s always a happy ending.
- But in mine… sadly it’s never-ending.

I’m Still on chapter one… Nor two, nor three.
- In this Story, I’ll never be free.

I close the book and think off sleep through the night.
- Thinking what’ll happen, if everything’s still alright.

I quit this question, and I quit this fright.
- Not knowing of my own chapter… for the night…

Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

Very nice, yet so sad, it ran very smoothly and had a certain ring to it. Great write. :)

[Kathryn]

different, and wuite refreshing. I know the struggle with actual chapters all too well, but the references to life's chapters is entrancing. well done :)

[TheUnforgivinFallenAnge..]

Well it never hurt to try something different

@AngelinDiguise

[HopelesslyDevoted]

interesting, its very different from your usual poems, but still very well done!

[State of Grace]

This is really deep, I love it! :)

[Alskar]

Love the dual voices going on, coming to an agreement at the end. Short but I feel what you've written is enough to convey the message here.