Something To Hide

Something To Hide

A Poem by Just Some Dreamer

Behind doors she shouts and screams
Outside she is a beauty queen
With a fake smile, she must chide
As if we have something to hide
She covers up his scars
Doesn't speak of Johnny, behind bars
She has cheated, she has lied
As if we have something to hide
When I paint across the halls
Her tirades echo, clear off the walls
She masks them and put on a smile, wide
As if we have something to hide
I see those who she clearly envies
She wishes we could be like the King's and Renvy's
She pulls away from strangers and keeps us on our side
As if we have something to hide
Its a miracle she has survived 
After all the secrets we have revived
If they escaped, surely she would've died
As if she has something to hide
So they picture is much clearly I see
The secrets are of her not me
Enraged, she has lied
As if we all had something to hide
I use my power
Send her into a gentle, little shower
I lose her in the angry sea and tide
Because then again,
We all have something to hide

© 2012 Just Some Dreamer


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DrD
The closing philosophical touch is a very nice conclusion. The pattern is quite good and the theme is more than sound. I liked this and encourage you to do more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Just Some Dreamer

11 Years Ago

Thank you for noticing the end part. That's what I was going for.
Johnny?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Just Some Dreamer

11 Years Ago

hahaha. Just a stereo typical name I fell upon. I had recently been reading The Outsiders, so I gues.. read more
Freckled Princess

11 Years Ago

Ahhh :P
Oh. My. God.
This is... Amazing.
Wow! I love the repition you used, the wording, even the flow is perfect.
As if we had something to hide.
The chilling echo of that word in the mind, the effect it had, sometimes as sarcasm, sometimes as truth, wow.
I am in awe.
Great job!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Owlgirl

11 Years Ago

:p thanks :) it's amazing. Utterly breathtaking.
Just Some Dreamer

11 Years Ago

daww You're so kind. (not to sound like the cheerlead :P) you're not just saying that, right?
Owlgirl

11 Years Ago

BE AGRESSIVE! BE-E AGRESSIVE! no I'm not, and that was an awesome high kick by the way :)
Ah! I see some grammatical errors!!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on October 14, 2012
Last Updated on October 30, 2012