Late September Dream

Late September Dream

A Poem by A.M. Al-Ali
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Though sad and melancholic, Sir Autumn does keep the kies of some memories and dreams.

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Early visions of new dawn
enter the existence window to mourn
the last thoughts of an autumnal night.
September, an ancient fellow drags
through its muddy roads
the dead summer's corpse into evanescent demise.
Heaven falls hugging its ground
to stir up memories of early creation
to play the hearts nostalgic vibes
of the days vanished like a traveling bird
through heaps of hours and tones times.
there the child runnig bare footed
celebrating the heavenly pour
there is the window pale and silently cry
there springs the mist from the unknown
spreading mysteries and white lost.
September, an ancient fellow knits the dark
spectra of the good past
but alas! and alas!
like the drops of dewy flowers
memories flee the morning lights.

© 2014 A.M. Al-Ali


Author's Note

A.M. Al-Ali
Take off your brain and start reading with a child's heart.

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A child's heart Ha'
Well past that age long ago.
liked this, read fast and it's very good.

Nice

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so beautifully written...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely write, I love the author's note. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well said and beautifully written

Posted 9 Years Ago


Personally, I find it beautiful. I don't look at poetry for rhythm. To me, real poetry is basically just words with heart and meaning; I believe this holds that true.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think that the thought was great, but I also found it hard to be pulled in. The poem may lack a certain rhythmic tone.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A.M. Al-Ali

9 Years Ago

First, I heartedly thank you for reviewing my writing.
seconed, I think modernism and post-m.. read more
Anna Blackburn

9 Years Ago

What I meant by rhythm, was that a poem should have a certain flow; like a river flowing over the ro.. read more
Enjoying every bit of it...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A.M. Al-Ali
A.M. Al-Ali

Al-Hasakah, Middle East, Syria



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Philologist, introverted, art lover, bibliophile, imagination prophet, an entity established in the mystical orient trying to inscribe my name on a cover page. more..


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