Unemotional Piece of Toast

Unemotional Piece of Toast

A Poem by John
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Wrote a comment of how I feel like an unemotional piece of toast and that inspired me to do this. :D hope it's not crappy

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A toast
Brown and crispy
Just like my ideas
They have been burned
By the flames
The flames of stupidity

The toast
It's only there for one reason
And it's to be gone
By the hunger of humanity
One bite at a time

And if your not careful
I will attack back
By choking you
Till you cough
And then
I will escape
The grips of humanity

Humanity
Is out to catch me
Because of my texture
My taste
My everything

My brother's and sister's
Out there
Ready for there fate
There destiny
There future in this cruel world

This is the story
the story of the Unemotional piece of toast

© 2016 John



Author's Note

John
My poem of an unemotional piece of toast. A crappy poem compared to the other good people who write poems. :D Is this even a poem?

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Oh my gosh! Glad I stumbled upon you. You writing style on this one highly interested. You compared non-living things to ideas and emotiond of the real world. In responce to what you wrote in the comment box; just because your writing style is diffren't, doesn't mean it is better or worse than anyone elses. What would be the point of comparing The Books "Moby Dick" And "Harry Potter," when they are two diffren't settings/genres? Saying one is better than the other is being oblvious to the whole point. If we want to truly see which one is better, we need to compare the books to other books of their own kind! Well done on this one, I really enjoyed it. Perked up my day a little :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. And I might make more like this



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Oh my gosh! Glad I stumbled upon you. You writing style on this one highly interested. You compared non-living things to ideas and emotiond of the real world. In responce to what you wrote in the comment box; just because your writing style is diffren't, doesn't mean it is better or worse than anyone elses. What would be the point of comparing The Books "Moby Dick" And "Harry Potter," when they are two diffren't settings/genres? Saying one is better than the other is being oblvious to the whole point. If we want to truly see which one is better, we need to compare the books to other books of their own kind! Well done on this one, I really enjoyed it. Perked up my day a little :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. And I might make more like this
I liked this a lot. Thank you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


one of my favourite works here :D

Posted 1 Year Ago


John

1 Year Ago

Thanks! Glad you like this
It was good at first, but what happened? Some parts seem to have its structure fall apart. Though over all, it is still pretty nice ^_^

Posted 1 Year Ago


John

1 Year Ago

He turned into a sandwich and was eaten by people. :D A good ending right?
Eisho Shu

1 Year Ago

yes, at least he got dressed up before the end XD
John

1 Year Ago

:D true true

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Added on January 30, 2016
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John

Narnia, Over the Rainbow, TX



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