Seven Shades of Blue

Seven Shades of Blue

A Poem by iNSOMniAC
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Seven different ways that I see the color blue.

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There upon the woman's pale face
Was a hint of blue;
A color that death streaked across her lips

There in his eyes were
The icy blue skies of tomorrow,
Which would soon be called today

There in London sat a big blue box,
And this box did nothing but show
The comrades inside the very edges of our universe

There between two lands laid
Tears of deep blue,
Waving to the sky like a long-lost friend

Blue streaked the humans' pale skin,
Like rivers down a snowy valley
Where Spring tattooed its name in our veins

Blue was the color that the two
Kids made in their parting;
The very color of their love

Blue was the color of Earth
From a mammoth distance;
Blue, the most human color

© 2014 iNSOMniAC


Author's Note

iNSOMniAC
If you see a mistake (misspelled words, incorrect grammar, etc), then please tell me. However, I am only a beginner, so please don't ask too much of me if there is something you don't particularly like. ^^"

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Wow, that was really beautiful... I love it. Remember to keep your head up, despite the fact that you feel thorns from where your crown was, you're alive and you have sweet victory. :) I can see a lot of your sadness and pain in this, hidden beneath the still beautiful overlay of how blue is the most human color. Both poems, the one hidden, and the one not, are amazing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The StoryTeller

9 Years Ago

Yep, it does. :P
No problem.
And ^u^ ?
iNSOMniAC

9 Years Ago

It's a face that looks better without this font. xD
The StoryTeller

9 Years Ago

Ah XD LOL :P
Blue is my all time favourite colour😍
Extraordinary writing-particularly the metaphors😍

Posted 9 Years Ago


iNSOMniAC

9 Years Ago

Why thank you. :)
Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Because it symbolizes feeling alive 😊
Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

You're welcome
"Blue streaked the humans' pale skin,
Like rivers down a snowy valley
Where Spring tattooed its name in our veins"

Great! Nicely written piece right there.

Posted 9 Years Ago


iNSOMniAC

9 Years Ago

Thanks. :3
Is the third stanza a reference to Doctor Who? If so then you've become one of my favorite people on this site. :) This is fantastic! You're fantastic!

Posted 9 Years Ago


iNSOMniAC

9 Years Ago

Yes, it is a Doctor Who reference. xD Oh.. A-Arigato. ^u^

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Added on December 13, 2014
Last Updated on December 13, 2014
Tags: Poem, Seven Shades of Blue, The Pain Bearer

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iNSOMniAC
iNSOMniAC

Watching my rear-view mirror, and what it is reflecting: it's an image that's broken.



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