Poison (A Poem 10 words or Less)

A poem I wrote for a contest

Your Love is like Poison

Slowly Killing Me

Reviews

[adlong]

Isn't amazing how you can say so much with just a few words

[Bare trees]

Short but sweet and to the point. I wouldn't want to hear that from anyone. LOL

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Perfect! Slow poisons are right up the alley of those who kill the human spirit.

[Momo Shikiro]

to the point with a lot of feeling. it pierces the very heart of me. because with a lot of people this is true.

[deeps]

Whoa!
I enjoyed this write
Straight to the bitter point.
Wonderful!