The End All

The End All

A Poem by Deron Alexis

The End All

 

Look at yourself

Your own reflection

Makes you sick

Makes you gag

Like filth your stench fills the room

That’s right

They’re whispering about you

I’m laughing too

I won’t stop until you make me

But you’re too weak to end me

Too weak to pull the trigger

Too weak to slide the blade

Too weak to plunge the knife

Too weak to take the dive

Too weak to tie the nuce

A petty half-hearted overdose

Is of little use

I will continue to drain you by a half-life

For every mile you walk

in those shoes

 

Yet further inward you cower

Closer to me and you darkest hour

I am your laughter’s bane

The buzzing in your brain

The weaver of your denial

Your personal thunder and rain

The one who burns your guilt

In stench and ceaseless filth

The nightmares that make you twitch

Your tooth grinding alter ego

 SCREAM MY NAME SCREAM IT B***H!

“Suicide!”

That’s right

The coward’s way out

Or retribution’s shout

Screaming at the back of your mind

“End Us!” “End Us!”

Screwing with you all the time

 

But you’re too weak to do it

So you’ll curl up in the corner

Into a little ball

And burn forevermore

And like filth your stench will fill the room

Till senescence comes, brings your doom

 

 


© 2013 Deron Alexis



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That feeling is known all to well. To say the very least its an emotional rolarcoaster though hell, when the best of times your still in hell, and at the worst the very depth of your soul is being shredded.
The first stanza is my favourite, it made me sit here for a second, stunned, wondering how you got into my head and stole the words that I've never spoken. Very great piece, your emotions are very well portrayed.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Deron Alexis

4 Years Ago

thanks Anna I appreciate it
Dude, I feel you. I feel the anger, the desperation. I feel that. Your emotions are on fire.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Deron Alexis

4 Years Ago

lol cool love it when people get my ideas
lotta anger here to say the least

Posted 4 Years Ago


Deron Alexis

4 Years Ago

yeah I was trying to show self hate as if it were the hate of another the way they won't hold back f.. read more
This very well puts a clear view on what you're trying to express. Its full of strong emotions and it brings to light the conflicting emotions that often go on inside a suicidal person's head. How you want to do it but you're too 'weak.' I can relate very well to what this poem is describing, and it describes it very well. I am sure others will also be able to relate to your poem! Very well written and good rhymes.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Deron Alexis

4 Years Ago

i'm glad it meant something to you thanks
Desperation in ink...
Deron I feel your pain.. I am sorry for your loss and I sympathize with you..
This is a very strong piece and I think you are very angry perhaps at your cousin...
maybe at yourself for not seeing and being able to stop her..
I think this is well written.. You should use your gift to heal..
I think if a person that was already suffering depression and self loathing were to read your opening lines it could really be devastating.

"I am your laughter’s bane
The buzzing in your brain
The weaver of your denial
Your personal thunder and rain
The one who burns your guilt" Strong lines, The second half of your poem is much stronger then the first half.. Just my opinion of course.. Im glad I got to read you.. shallimarRose

Posted 4 Years Ago


Deron Alexis

4 Years Ago

twaz by design that way the escalation showing how loud that crazy part of us can get when its hell .. read more
shallimarRose

4 Years Ago

I will read more when i return on Tuesday... Rose
Disturbing and full of desperation & angst, but I'm sure that's what you were trying to convey. These kinds of works always distress me having lost my sister to suicide, all I can say, is there's always hope...I'm sure that's of little comfort but the pain left behind is excruiateingly unbearable...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Deron Alexis

4 Years Ago

I think people commit suicide when the distress of what is here out weighs that which is left behind.. read more
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

I get that Deron, but all you're doing is transferring the pain to someone else, I realize there is .. read more
Deron Alexis

4 Years Ago

thanks for reading Frieda I appreciate it

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Deron Alexis
Deron Alexis

Cunupia village, Caroni, Trinidad and Tobago



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I write for fun and mostly so I don't explode. For this reason I also play and listen to music draw and sketch my other interest are science in all forms, ancient history, and Mythology. Most of my in.. more..

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