The Box

It's quite confusing but thats why I quite liked what Ive written because you have to explore the deeper meaning x Basically about being trapped

The Box

There are four walls around me,

Walls that you yourself made,

All of a sudden I can’t see,

But I know you won’t come to my aid.

 

I’m sceptical of your “love”,

That to you comes as a shock,

You think you’re from above,

And me, just a bug from the dock.

 

You say I don’t know much,

I’m too inexperienced, too small,

Hold your pitying touch,

And watch as I grow tall.

 

I know you think I’m weak,

And people use me by force,

It’s because I differ from your cliques,

That and my “persona” of course.

 

The walls are shrinking fast,

Restraining me against life,

I hope I stop breathing last,

So you can’t use your knife.

 

Reviews

[Magdelena]

Very powerful piece.. Congrats!!

Mags xx

[deeps]

I really enjoyed this piece. It's powerful and wonderful.
The emotions in this really touch base and tugs the heart.
Very well expressed and written.

[OT]

nice strong write!! consistent content and theme as well!! nice read!

[storiestotell]

Solid and deep powerful write!