INCENSED

INCENSED

A Poem by DIVYA
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The place where I am staying...has this persistent, disturbing smell of incense...

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Acrid sandalwood

Incense burnt to placate God

Jolts dead man to life


© 2017 DIVYA



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''Tis better that than the smell of the place where my old mum stays.....stale urine. Ughh

Posted 2 Months Ago


A good fun write :) Truth told in a humorous way.
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Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
No matter what purpose you use it for, incense has the power to completely alter your frame of mind in a matter of seconds. Your poetic write proves this theory - and - I know what you mean! :-)

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Are these haiku poems Diyva?

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

2 Months Ago

A senryu as they call it. Haikus are about nature. I am bad at structured writing but trying...
Dutch

2 Months Ago

No your not bad at all. Your actually pretty good at them. I like your writing its direct and powerf.. read more
Does your head in that stuff. Should be banned.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

2 Months Ago

I know...it was awful and at a 5 Star hotel at that. Quite a few foreign tourists would suffer in th.. read more
Strong incense- no sense!- ha! I know what you mean my friend. Love the title, poem and the (in)sense of humor. Perfect!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Cleverly contrived 5: 7: 5.

Such goings-on can point to mind'-wandering or/and soul searching, metaphorical or tongue in cheek hiding behind closed doors perhaps!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

2 Months Ago

The scent was distracting...Thank you for stopping by...
emmajoy

2 Months Ago

Scent often is... :) You're welcome DIVYA
it's used as a cover up...often i think we have different kinds of incense to cover up the guilt we feel for things we do in life...but the tracks remain...maybe in that scent of conscience...
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

2 Months Ago

Indeed, that is such a great use of incense Mr. Jacob. As a cover up for our guilt! Wow. Thanks for .. read more

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DIVYA
DIVYA

INDIA, India



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English is my third language. So I can't be anything but straight and simple in it. My poetry is clear cut and devoid of finer nuances, innuendos and drama. In other words, I am easy to read. So pleas.. more..

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