SOLAR ECLIPSE

SOLAR ECLIPSE

A Poem by DIVYA
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Will plunge places into darkness on August 21st 2017

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Mocking the sunlight

Audacious moon cloaks the sun

Mimicking the night  


© 2017 DIVYA



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This is good! I'm looking forward to this eclipse. They say it's the first time a solar eclipse which has a full path that can only be seen in the USA -- & this hasn't happened since an eclipse in 1776. I like your personification of the moon here. Good animation to convey this static scene! *smile* Fondly, Margie

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DIVYA

2 Months Ago

Many thank yous Margie. I am a bit dissappointed it won't be visible from India. So enjoy the once i.. read more



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really stunning piece...
thought it'd be cliche
and then you blew me away.

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DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating...
I really like the first line.

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DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Thanks for appreciating always...
Was there not an eclipse last night.
Really need to stop people forcing me to drink.
I'll send you a picture when it comes.

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DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Lol...please do Paul. Thanks for the comment.
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Thats creative..............


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DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Thanks a lot...
mocking and mimicking.....there will be lots of that here on Monday...we are in the very center of it...
will get totally dark for a couple minutes...

i can't wait till it's over...will be such a crazy zoo here.

beautifully done haiku.
j.

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DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much Mr. Jacob!
This is good! I'm looking forward to this eclipse. They say it's the first time a solar eclipse which has a full path that can only be seen in the USA -- & this hasn't happened since an eclipse in 1776. I like your personification of the moon here. Good animation to convey this static scene! *smile* Fondly, Margie

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

2 Months Ago

Many thank yous Margie. I am a bit dissappointed it won't be visible from India. So enjoy the once i.. read more

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Added on August 19, 2017
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DIVYA
DIVYA

INDIA, India



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English is my third language. So I can't be anything but straight and simple in it. My poetry is clear cut and devoid of finer nuances, innuendos and drama. In other words, I am easy to read. So pleas.. more..

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