T'WAS THE RAIN

T'WAS THE RAIN

A Poem by DIVYA
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Some real, some word play More poetry and fiction than fact. I am just working at putting every feeling real or imaginary into apt words.

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Today,
In the pouring, pelting rain
A smile was shared over
My car's half open window pane
Not our official, every day smile
But one spreading from the lips
To inundate eyes, already
Exchanging an intimate hello
And we momentarily enmeshed
Nothing done. All done.
Leaving a flush more profuse
Than the overflowing lanes
Perhaps it wasn't us
Perhaps it was the rain
Playing its usual dotty games
That pelting, pouring rain
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Author's Note

DIVYA
More poetry and fiction than fact. I am just working at putting every feeling real or imaginary into apt words. A necessary step towards my dream of writing a book in future some time.

Thank you for reading.

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Though it be the rainy season in your part of the world, it's certainly inspiring your creative muse my friend!

A fine flowing and fluent poem, brimming with delightful dalliance and per chance, romantic opportunity as those rain drops ever 'pitter patter'

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much friend. I am so glad you liked the flow and the moid of the poem set in a rainy da.. read more



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I enjoy it when a poet can write about something mundane and turn it into something special. Life should have more moments like that. Even if some of those moments are ambiguous.

Nicely expressed. :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Thanks a lot for such an encouraging review!
Though it be the rainy season in your part of the world, it's certainly inspiring your creative muse my friend!

A fine flowing and fluent poem, brimming with delightful dalliance and per chance, romantic opportunity as those rain drops ever 'pitter patter'

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much friend. I am so glad you liked the flow and the moid of the poem set in a rainy da.. read more
but maybe it was you!

not the rain....so often we hear of road rage...

i like the poem showing an interlude of road love in the moment....even if it is just a moment...it's beautiful...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Fleeting moments enriching the soul. I thank you from my heart for all the cherished reviews today.

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DIVYA
DIVYA

INDIA, India



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