SMOKE RING

SMOKE RING

A Poem by DIVYA
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For my Muse

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Inhale; make an O with your silken lips


Blow me in whorls of silvered smoke

Feel my passion as I rise in the air

In feisty loops, zigzag in motion

In brave imitation of the pizazz

And drama in your odd soul

Persisting against the wind,

If just for a few moments

Before wobbling away

In the sad realization

That I am nothing

But a wisp

 

Outside of you

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© 2017 DIVYA



Author's Note

DIVYA
Pic: Courtesy my muse
Thank you for reading...

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Another great write. Pic not bad either

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for the kind visit, my friend.
Neville Pettitt

3 Weeks Ago

My pleasure, N
Cunningly imaginative

Great Read

Matthew

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

4 Weeks Ago

Thanks a lot Matthew!
Matthew Kult

4 Weeks Ago

You're welcome.

Matthew
It's amazing how the rings appear and vanishes like a cloud.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

4 Weeks Ago

A great metaphor for illusion...thanks...
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Gul
I am too tempted to read you. It's unstoppable for me to resist your writer.
Fantastic creator, you are!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Thank you for stopping by and leaving such kind words, Gul.
Great picture and poem my friend. Lovely tapering form, bright color and words like wisps of smoke around the head of your muse...wonderful metaphor and imagery. Just perfect!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Month Ago

I always am full of wonder at the myriad ways in which a picture, a mere image or even a sliver of l.. read more
Just the coolest words and display...ever. That is all.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Month Ago

I am so thrilled by your appreciation. Thank you very much Carol.
Like a fleeting, clandestine love affair, it was sure good while it lasted, alas, like any good cigar, it's mood enhancing effects are all to brief!

Superbly penned with desire, intensity and passionate pizazz aplenty!



Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Month Ago

I agree and the intoxication is fleeting too. Thanks a million dear Tom.
'Outside o'you...'
Sure it's as intimate as how dear it is to me.

Like what your genius does to me. You know?

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effector Prime

1 Month Ago

yes I can't say it enough... smoking for me has span forever been the joy of blowing rings... to le.. read more
DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Oddly, I find it very fascinating, perhaps something to do with a childhood crush that still lingers.. read more
Effector Prime

1 Month Ago

Cheers! : )
Clever stuff Divya, in the unlikely event that we should ever meet remind me to share a cigarette with you....Ha

Posted 1 Month Ago


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DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Lol. I don't smoke Doc but anything for dear old friends. :)
It feels great to hear from you... read more
Dr. Wood ?

1 Month Ago

I do not smoke either Divya........ha so it's an impasse
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SSR
Beautiful and creative Divya...
But how much, hard and long you inhale me but your mind, body and surroundings can't support and u will eventually exhale me............... Life

Posted 1 Month Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Month Ago

That's such a beautiful thought SSR. Thanks a lot for stopping by dear friend.

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