BLUE MOON

BLUE MOON

A Poem by DIVYA
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Once in a blue moon...

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I’ll be the blue vein

Traversing your throat, pulsing

As we lie skin to skin


I’ll be a blue orchid

Crushed upon your lips

Bruised, from our night of sin


When we tenderly kiss

I’ll be a rushing blue sea

Lulling our hearts from within


On the edge of surrender

To wild passion and pain

I’ll be the blue tear you shed


I'll be the blue moon

That glistens upon lovers

Going berserk, on starlit beds

 

 


© 2017 DIVYA



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DIVYA
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Your words carry such a tender wildness for your soul's desire, flowing through the rivers of music from your muse. The softness, the deep hues, the longing all create such a transcendent place, a heaven on earth; a space few ever find. May it be yours always, dear Divya.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Whispers in a swirling blue mist, gently prodding the words buried in the transcendent places in the.. read more
An owl on the moon

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And I am always grateful for your presence in this world, making music that souls can dance to and s.. read more



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Words fill with passion and need. I liked the intense feel of the need and the want.
"On the edge of surrender
To wild passion and pain
I’ll be the blue tear you shed"
I loved the complete poem. The above lines were my favorite. Thank you Divya for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote



Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for such an awesome review. Your words give me much joy and inspiration to go on.
Coyote Poetry

4 Days Ago

I'm glad and you are welcome my friend.
Such wonderful words. You write so beautifully. It is so pure, meaningful, and imaginative that it always manages to blow me away. Thank you for the beautiful writing.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

3 Weeks Ago

I thank you from the depths of my heart...
This is an exceptionally well written and otherwise compelling little poem you have penned Divya, splendid in fact.....All Good Things, N

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for stopping and such an encouraging review!
Neville Pettitt

3 Weeks Ago

Twas my pleasure entirely....
What a powerful you, you will be! I love the way you have found the different blue things to be and made a very loving poem out of it. A fine write.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

3 Weeks Ago

Its a wonderful feeling to be able to draw inspiration from others sometimes...Thank you so much for.. read more
This is beautifully soft and displays such lovely image. Love the poetic expression within each verse..

nice work

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for suck kind words of appreciation...
You put a lot of passion into your words and it shows.

Nice writing. :)

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

4 Weeks Ago

Thanks a lot for such a kind review.
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Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

4 Weeks Ago

Awww...Thank you so much Keith. This is the most wonderful review ever! Thanks a million!
Damn that's deep I love it, great work.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much!
Passionately arousing

Great read

Matthew

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much for stopping by leaving kind words.
Enchanting blue poem and images...eloquent, sensual words...lovely form, flow, cadence, imagery and rhyme taking us to the moon and back. I feel the unbridled passion in this poem and the celebration of it. Beautiful my friend. Brava!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your kind, encouraging words, dear friend.

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DIVYA
DIVYA

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