HE IS THE RAIN

HE IS THE RAIN

A Poem by DIVYA
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A tribute to an alpha love

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He is the gentle burst of rain

that soaks and fills her earth

He bids the spring in her

to take another birth

 

As moonglades lighten lakes

on a cloudless, silvery night

He fills her ashen soul

with his quiet brilliance and light

 

His crescent blazes as the sun

bedecking her brow from afar

He’s the fire in her moon

dimming every other star

 

His gaze upon her breast

burns hazel with lust for her

His hands that grapple with beasts

do love her warm and tender

 

She is the river to his sea

swirling in his tidal force

His Mars enters her Venus

eternally changing her course

 

Silence is the bearer

the substrate of his dreams

Together, they pierce its awning

gliding all the way upstream

 

If darkness ever looms on him

Its veil crushing and full blown

He cradles her still to him

hushing her fears unknown

 

An arrow in the mist, an eagle adrift

yet there’s no quitting in him

She knows they are forever

her chalice is full to the brim


© 2019 DIVYA



Author's Note

DIVYA



Some verses may seem disjointed...these are a collection of my personal impressions meaningful only to him...

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well personally, all the verses connected for me...and the story has valid theme...I have always thought that men could and should have that tender side, and not be afraid to show it.
Warriors on the battlefield, but gentle spirits in relationships...when that is called for as well.
love the word "substrate"
and that stanza is so cool...
and may her chalice be always "up to the brim."
j.

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

6 Days Ago

Thank you so much Jacob...Your words mean a lot as this was a special effort to sketch a very specia.. read more



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a marvelously composed intense love poetry which leaves the reader engrossed in sketching a beautiful intense scene.👍

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DIVYA

1 Day Ago

Thank you for stopping by with such kind words of appreciation, dear Muskan.
She knows they are forever
Her chalice is full to the brim

Love that so beautiful loved this poem
Thanks for the great read

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

4 Days Ago

Hello Julie!

I’m delighted you stopped by! Thank you for appreciating this piece o.. read more
Juliespenhere

4 Days Ago

Hi a pleasure to read really
This shows such an overflowing of love ..
tenderness and fulfillment of affection
and admiration..love the detailing throughout
this fine descriptive piece..
masterfully penned indeed

Posted 4 Days Ago


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DIVYA

4 Days Ago

Thank you so much Fran. My subject is great so the poem was a joy to pen. Have a beautiful weekend m.. read more
I liked it all the way through
Each verse had meaning for me /us

If darkness ever looms on him - Could she not sense it ?

If she does she would cradle him
and sooth away the ache to bring him calm >>> just what I would receive

She knows she has a good man/they will never part

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

4 Days Ago

Hello Rose !

Thank you for such an insightful review...it’s a special kind of joy w.. read more
wow! lovely, sensual, supremely romantic ...sentiments only very real love can declare .. i fell in love reading ... i'll be measuring myself against your alpha male all day now ;) we should all be so brave to be so tender and faithful ... he can only wear the crown proffered if and when she places it ;))) no question as to each verse connected .. theme, metaphors and personifications all sing for you Divya ..thanks so much for sharing
E.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

4 Days Ago

Indeed E, in life, there are always risks. I took a risk and hit a jackpot. I can tell you now, thi.. read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Days Ago

yes yes yes .... with that note in me noodle ... its a good time to bid the Cafe adieu for the day ;.. read more
DIVYA

4 Days Ago

🤗 have a nice evening you
Wow, strength, compassion, love, comfort, beauty and power. Nicely wrapped inside a perfect bundle.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

5 Days Ago

Thank you for stopping by, dear Dawn, with such kind words of appreciation. Sending you much love...
As tributes and dedications go, this poem is right up there with the best in terms of theme, imagery, structure and originality.....

Giving this poem multiple readings, I am discovering different meanings behind the verses each time. I agree with Christine; your imagery here is top notch; delicately written and carefully constructed. Painstakingly so in order to capture the true essence of your subject in near perfect structure and rhyme. The ABCB rhyme scheme is very unique and that you managed to maintain its consistency throughout is a plaudit for your talent.

As for the content? Any man or woman would be extremely flattered and gracious to have such words written about them. It takes a special writer to be able to construct a poem like this, paying delicate care to all the outer and internal features of poetry whilst also relaying the message and the emotions clearly to the reader. With this poem you have succeeded on all levels. The object of your affection is one to be treasured and one who treasures you in return.

This is a poem that will be treasured and held close to the heart and one you should be proud of having given birth to. Always keep writing, through the fog and quagmire, for poetry and words breathe within you.

A wonderful poem. Sensual, loving, caring and one I am proud to have read. Kudos, petal. 🌷🌹

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

5 Days Ago

Thank you so much Doodley. I'm glad I stayed up late and wrote these verses then. I wasn't sure they.. read more
Doodley

5 Days Ago

You are always welcome. Keep writing for I am always here to read. 🌷🌹
Dear DIVYA, you write with much passion here about the he who lifts her spirits and touches her soul. Your imagery and word choice are top notch. Every she deserves a he who is able to sprinkle that magic, who has a tender side to his nature. . Sadly they are hard to come by. The she in your lines is immersed in his essence. Totally captivated in my opinion. That is special indeed. A wonderful write. Uplifting to read.

Chris

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

5 Days Ago

Dear Chris!
Indeed, my friend, I was totally into this poem as I wrote it and it was such an.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

5 Days Ago

It was a beautiful poem to read on a dull, wet morning here. It certainly lifted my spirits :)
DIVYA

5 Days Ago

I'm so glad dear Chris. A big happy thank you... !
Here's wishing you a most pleasant day ah.. read more
well personally, all the verses connected for me...and the story has valid theme...I have always thought that men could and should have that tender side, and not be afraid to show it.
Warriors on the battlefield, but gentle spirits in relationships...when that is called for as well.
love the word "substrate"
and that stanza is so cool...
and may her chalice be always "up to the brim."
j.

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

6 Days Ago

Thank you so much Jacob...Your words mean a lot as this was a special effort to sketch a very specia.. read more

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