Piece for Peace.

Put me together

Piece(s) for peace?

and shoot my skin

if you must,

We're in a war zone now.

(you can play bigger than that)

 

And before we cry

(try)

let us remember

those

(terms of endearment)

who died

and what they meant

(for us to remember)

(We're in a war zone now?)

 

Things could be worse

they said until (our) their deaths

(the hour of their deaths)

That is the essence of our humanity

(we'll chant until it's true)

'Cause we're a killing 

machine

The essence of

our humanity

(This is a warzone now)

 

And we say

this is

Hercules to the rescue

(tallyho)

I'm sorry

I'm mean

Over the top

 

So this is

Pretentiously

Potentially

a war game.

 

And we're in a war zone now

(Where are we going to)

Where we're going to

Self destruct (?)

 

Reviews

[babyblue]

I really enjoyed this poem

[Eira Anchor]

mmmmm i likes it! awesome title.
"petentiously, potentially" - that was cool too.

can tell english has got you in the mood.
claire clearly really likes everything, too. I mean, you can just tell by all the detail she went into, can't you?

[Cassidy Mask]

love it