Words Like Snow

Words Like Snow

A Poem by Beatrice Mars

Your words are coming

Thick and

Fast now,

Just like the

Snow outside my window

But they're (it's) not at all

Beautiful.

 

Your words are cold,

But at least they don't

Register

(Much like the snow,

It melts on impact)

I've learnt to

Ignore you when

You're like this.

(Angry and harsh,

Like the snow outside)

 

I'm not some outfit

You can peel off

At the end of the night,

You can't discard me at will.

You might try to throw me about,

(Like snow, haphazard from heaven)

But I know you love me

And soon you will calm

(Like the snow outside my window,

It's starting to settle)

 

Or maybe, like snow, you will just

Stop.

(Turn to rain.)


© 2010 Beatrice Mars



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EMP
this is brilliant, amazinggg imagery. you genius, you!

"but i know you loev me and soon you will calm like the snow outside my window, it's starting to settle."

ahhhh fantastic! *adds to faves*

Posted 7 Years Ago


oooohh i like this muchly. Good use of an extended similie there beth ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Beatrice Mars
Beatrice Mars

United Kingdom



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I'm an 19 year old girl. Of all the souls that stand create I have elected one. When sense from spirit files away, And subterfuge is done; When that which is and that which was Apart, intr.. more..

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