My Amazing Family

My Amazing Family

A Poem by ThisVivian
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This poem is in AABB form (except for that essential last line), and as my other poems, has 100 words.

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I have my family members in my heart,

for all of them are actually really smart.

I love my Mom, Dad, sister, and brother.

They are all just so brilliant as no other!

 

This household of mine is certainly neat,

and is actually literally, to me, so sweet.

Since I’ll always respect all of them lots,

they will indeed be kept in my thoughts!

 

Everyone of my family is so amazing,

so other people of course are gazing.

To me, they are going to be inspired,

because they are always required!

 

I shall never ever forget anyone in my family.


© 2017 ThisVivian



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A celebration of family and life kept in togetherness. Very enjoyable....:)...............

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

You are welcome. ....:::::))))
ThisVivian

1 Month Ago

:D Do you have a Facebook account?
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

Nope. Just here
I really liked your word choice in the second stanza. It made that whole stanza flow well.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ThisVivian

1 Month Ago

Thank you~! :D

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ThisVivian
ThisVivian

San Jose, CA



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I am a 22 year old author, who loves to write and edit poetry/stories. I tend to keep my poems with 100 words. (I keep my username as "ThisVivian" for other websites as well.) more..

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