My Harsh Life

My Harsh Life

A Poem by ThisVivian
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This poem is in ABAB form (except for that sad, last line). It has 100 words, as most of my other works.

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I am an actual English author,
and am also an also an artist.
It is sad if my works bother:
for I am never the smartest.

While I like to write, draw, and edit,
I still indeed feel dumb, very bitter.
My projects do actually need credit:
at times, I literally feel as a quitter.

Because it is hard to gain any attention,
I really feel like I am actually invisible.
It is difficult for me, to be mentioned:
my whole life seems really fictional.

It is truly hard for me to live,
so I feel foolish at many times.

© 2017 ThisVivian



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Pretty good. Those last lines might seem morbid or dark to some but I find them refreshingly honest to admit that Life is difficult and sometimes Life is a cruel, fickle and capricious thing.

The second line "and am also an also an artist." Is that a mistake or was it intentional?

Overall it's a good poem and I enjoyed the last lines especially. Good job.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ThisVivian

3 Months Ago

That was intentional. Why, I always do also love to draw and Photoshop instead of just writing poems.. read more
Lovecraft

3 Months Ago

Lol, I had a feeling it was intentional, just wanted to know for sure.
ThisVivian

3 Months Ago

Thank you~! :)



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Pretty good. Those last lines might seem morbid or dark to some but I find them refreshingly honest to admit that Life is difficult and sometimes Life is a cruel, fickle and capricious thing.

The second line "and am also an also an artist." Is that a mistake or was it intentional?

Overall it's a good poem and I enjoyed the last lines especially. Good job.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ThisVivian

3 Months Ago

That was intentional. Why, I always do also love to draw and Photoshop instead of just writing poems.. read more
Lovecraft

3 Months Ago

Lol, I had a feeling it was intentional, just wanted to know for sure.
ThisVivian

3 Months Ago

Thank you~! :)

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Added on August 22, 2017
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ThisVivian
ThisVivian

San Jose, CA



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I am a 22 year old author, who loves to write and edit poetry/stories. I tend to keep my poems with 100 words. (I keep my username as "ThisVivian" for other websites as well.) more..

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