Why Would Guys Like Me?

Why Would Guys Like Me?

A Poem by ThisVivian

This sad poem is in ABAB form and has 100 words, as my other works do, as well.


How I'm so stupid, ugly and really weird,

I don't know why guys say they'd love me!

They don't think I need my mind cleared:

it's so strange how boys do not agree!


Alright, fellows, so now let's get this straight:

how could a fat, stupid pig be in any heart?!

It's so curious to me how you say I'm "great":

since I am so indecent, and never ever smart!


Dudes, just stop loving me, please,

since I am such a really bizarre girl!

Eyes would not get set on me at ease.

Looking at me, they’d go swirl(s)!

© 2017 ThisVivian

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Shouldn't be down on yourself. Let guys love you all they want. Great writing. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago

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1 Year Ago

Aw, thanks. xD

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Added on September 8, 2017
Last Updated on October 5, 2017



San Jose, CA

I am a 22 year old author, who loves to write and edit poetry/stories. I tend to keep my poems with 100 words. (I keep my username as "ThisVivian" for other websites as well.) more..