Daddy's New Gift

Daddy's New Gift

A Poem by ThisVivian

This poem is in AABB form. It has 100 words, as my other works do too.

My Daddy usually buys things online,
since he has found stuff that are just so fine.
That had me find a neat, lovely purple diary.
Dad actually bought it without an inquiry!

But then I found another one, prettier,
for it was really better on the exterior.
Being my second favorite color, gray,
of course it could then make my day!

It was sadly not currently in stock,
with its beauty and amazing lock.
Daddy'd still buy "when available",
it is now that gift seen favorable!

I'm now excited for that new present,
because it seems really pleasant!

© 2018 ThisVivian

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Poetess indeed. Enjoyed the snapshots .

Posted 5 Months Ago

I really enjoy the flow of this. Carefree and whimsical. Bravo my friend

Posted 5 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


5 Months Ago

Thank you so much~! :D
You realoy crafted this one with a very well end rhyme. The content is superb. Well done, ThisVivian.

Posted 10 Months Ago

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10 Months Ago

I think you SP'ed "really", hm? But thank you~! :D

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3 Reviews
Added on September 28, 2017
Last Updated on April 25, 2018



San Jose, CA

I am a 22 year old author, who loves to write and edit poetry/stories. I tend to keep my poems with 100 words. (I keep my username as "ThisVivian" for other websites as well.) more..