Hello Sunshine

Hello Sunshine

A Poem by Threads
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A praise to the sun, and rediscovered happiness.

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Hello sunshine
It has been a while. 
How are things with you again?
I've quite forgotten you know

I missed you old friend
the clouds covered your smile for some time
I wished the dark would rend
fears obscured, but it did not for mine

It's like that in the north sometimes,
you know how it is.
But look, you're back!
I saw you shining again,
just like before!

You hadn't shriveled up over this long winter.
I suppose you didn't the other times either.
Oh there's so much I want to catch up on!

How was it like
to run about without ice beneath my feet?
So free no cares
I can finally throw off all those cloaks again!
Ah how I forgot,
what it was like
without all that weight

With you out there again in the sky
My doors are open to the world again
Who cares if the elements hurt a bit

It doesn't matter,
because the Sun is up there
shining light again through the clear.
upon my confidence returned

© 2017 Threads



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It doesn't matter,
because the Sun is up there
shining light again through the clear.
upon my confidence returned

love this leaves room for hope.
Amazing! :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


I had to read this when I saw the title. Such a great poem for spring, and a great metaphor.
"You hadn't shriveled up over this long winter.
I suppose you didn't the other times either.
Oh there's so much I want to catch up on!"
It's wonderful and exactly how I feel about springtime. So nice to read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Threads

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the kind review. Springtime is without a doubt one of my favorite times of year, and I.. read more
Funny how some sunlight can clear everything ..... i love the clarity you carry here
There is an openness about your words
that is quite inspirational

Posted 1 Year Ago


The atmosphere feels magical. I can feel the freedom of the person as she runs around under the sunny sky. Beautiful piece. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love nothing more than sitting out side on a bright sunny day, it makes me hopefully and inspires me to make the best of the day. this poem is like that in written from to me, hopeful and inspiring.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is a beautiful subject to write upon. I liked the way you have expressed the way like you are really talking to the sun. The tone of this poem was really good. This poem if considered in a broader sense gives hope, inspiration and encouragement to the readers. A shining sun is a metaphor for happiness and that is how I am feeling after reading this. ☺

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on March 6, 2017
Last Updated on March 7, 2017
Tags: Sunshine, light, happiness, excitement

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