The Questions

Some questions in our lives are hard to answer.

What is the purpose of smiling?

If...

Deep inside you're dying...

But...

What is the point of crying?

If...

There's still someone for you waiting...

Yet…

 

Why can’t you move on just by forgetting?

 

If…

 

With all your best you’re really trying…

 

And…

 

Why does your heart keep on loving?

 

If…

 

You know in yourself that you’re hurting…

Reviews

[stars are far]

i think that some questions if we answered them life became tasteless and the point of life is forgetting because if don't forget you can't live...
and the questions you are asking , you can't have an answer because otherwise you will not live ...

but you did a great work capturing some stuff that people can't hold in there hands ...
keep going :)

[dreaming dame]

I feel that right now... Perfectly written.

[Chris]

Seems thinking is what we do best... though not nearly often enough.

Always ask questions... its how you learn.

Take care,
Chris

[CyndiR]

There is so many questions in our life, but I agree, maybe sometime we need to put the questions in place so that our life will have more... emotions? IDK, but sometimes life gives us questions to solve and at that time is the right time to solve it, or I'll just ignore it actually.
A great write with questions really important, the poem is really inspiring!
Amazing Write!
~CyndiR

[TheElfPrincess]

Very well written, important questions you asked in this poem. I loved it. Well done.

[BABy]

but quite essential...I love the way u think....inspiration.....llove writing

[Calypso]

I've wondered this too. sad...

[lovely-livia]

i love short poems like this,wonderful!!!

[EMF]

Talk about leaping off the page. Too few people are reluctant to try anything new in format or expression. So nice to see you have done both and done them well

[PyroKitty24]

This was a good poem. I really enjoyed it, though I don't know much about poetry. Nice job~

[deeps]

Oh WOW this is deep & so powerful. Loved the emotion behind this write. So well written and expressed.