Life's Dead End

Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live.

Sometimes…

 

Dreams are better than reality…

 

You can see things that will never happen in true existence…

 

You can go to places where you want to be…

 

You can do actions that you can’t perform in the real life…

 

 

But above all…

 

You can feel the embrace of the people who have passed away…

 

And once more

 

Show how much you love them…

 

 

My grandfather…

 

Meeting you in my dreams is still a gift…

     

From that day you left us, you’ll never imagine how life is gloomy…

 

I will miss you forever and until this pain of losing you fades…

 

 

Heavenly Father…

 

Guide him as he enters your kingdom…

 

Let his memories be mused by the heart of the people who know him…

 

His life is worth living…

 

 

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

So true and very moving! I agree with this poem. A lot of people fear death as it's the worst thing.. but death itself isn't something to fear. It's not having enough time.. to live is what is feared. We don't know when it'll be our time. We just gotta live the best/most we can. Enjoy life as much as we can. I'm so sorry to hear about your grandfather. I lost one grandfather last year and yeah, losing someone that we know is hard. I felt his presence when I heard the news and I cried the whole night as I went to sleep. But I felt his comfort too.. like making me feel it'll be okay. Hmmm..this piece is very powerful! Amazing write girl! Nice work! And remember, even the people we lose.. they'll always be with us whenever we need them. Precious memories will always be in our hearts. It's okay to miss him.

[Dream Weaver]

This is beautifully written, your imagery carries
an endearing message: Gone but never forgotten.
Nicely done....

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Very passionate, deep, and moving!

[brenda]

he is alright with god feel the same way about my grandma and beautiful and tragic poem !:)

[Neva Flores - Changeful..]

A wonderful tribute to the memory of your grandfather. Dreams can be wonderful.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!

[FallenWingz]

i sometimes get dreams/visions of my grandma....i have read that they come to warn us about sumtin, whta it cud be is always a blur......nice poem and i like how u wrote about guiding him to the light...

[sasdqweqwdasdas]

Dreams are wish-fulfillments. You do really missed him so much. I know he must be reading this poem now with a smile on his face. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great way to express loss and sorrow. Dreams many times can be great than reality but if we only live in our dreams we can't achieve them

[fetusparty]

My dreams are always better than my reality.
I loved this poem, another one of yours that I will carry with me. :P Good job.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

I can really relate to this one cause I just felt this recently. You are true in saying that death doesnt take someone away from us. Theyre always right there with us. Loved the poem :)