I Tried Enough

...When you've given your best yet you still think it wasn't good enough...

I  tried to be a sun to lighten up your entire day

I tried to be a heroine for you in a unique way

I tried to be a dream that can make you aim high

I tried to be a synthetic rose that will never die

 

I  tried to be a shadow watching you every moment

I tried to be a medicine when you seem not decent

I tried to be a chocolate that can remove your depression

I tried to be a fairy who can make you drink a love potion

 

I  tried everything to impress you with my ability

But it looks not sufficient to be your one and only

Someday, I’ll do better and I will come to reach you

You are a dream so high that will never come true

Reviews

[Legacy]

Thrinna Mae,

Currently missing those moments of things (this good) just popping in my head! ;)

To the eye, ‘tis pleasing
To the emotions, ‘tis giving
To the end, ‘tis moving

The wonder of it all is that the font walks right beside the flow in your words; I can nearly hear you thinking this aloud.

Most wonderfully done, especially as it just popped in your head, pure and sweet yet bitter and dissatisfied. (The emotion).

Allowing me to flashback to those days of hopeful love and excitement - ah, to be let down by love again (in these days). Time is slipping by; embrace the love despite its' deceit.

Thank you for sharing,

Legacy

P.S. Have you entered any of the contests within Poetic Infusion Society? If not, I believe this one belongs in Love.

[Ency Bearis]

Eloquently written and versed. Lovely and great poem indeed.

[WildSoul]

amazing work. Love the way you write. It seems to come so easily for you. All the best and keep writing.

[zainul]

Wonderful write.
Needs no explanation as the intended message is clear.

[OTownPete]

You just never know when the fruits of your efforts will finally bloom...don't give up. Your friend in words, Pete

[SajaiVip !]

This poem is amazing ! Looks like you're really talented :) !

[Guitar Heroine]

wow, ur poem is so great, amazing :D ---> keep it up!

[Ravel Lopez]

I really like this little poem. I had a small problem with the rhyme in the 2 stanza. What about "depression/...in your sole possession" Otherwise, good. I would like to read more of your work.

[EsterS]

Amazing!! loved it!! so much emotion! your a great writer!!

[storiestotell]

Sometimes you can be everything, but turns out it means nothing to the one you're trying to be there for. Full of depth and emotion.

[PerlySunflower]

Sometimes thats all we can do is try and try again...you have penned this well
Thanks for sharing this with me...I can relate somewhat