He is the "ONE"

He is the "ONE"

A Poem by Thrinna Mae
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Without Him...You'll never imagine how life becomes worthless.

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He’s the one I truly need in my entire life

Whenever I have to face the biggest strife

I call for His help as I witness the rush of the sea

He gently holds my hand and powerfully covers me

 

I sometimes hurt him by doing unforgiving actions

Yet He continues to love me without any conditions

Through the bliss and darkness, He was right beside me

He never leaves me behind as we walk together slowly

 

Thanks to this person who saved my soul and spirit

For giving me a life and teaching me how to use it

Your kindness can’t be described by any single word

I worship you and I will always do, my dear Lord


© 2011 Thrinna Mae



Author's Note

Thrinna Mae
Just had a Bible study yesterday and I did this poem for Him... :)))
I respect all thoughts and religions...
Thanks for reading/reviewing... :)))

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gratitude makes for a happier life! It helps us to stay balanced and humble. I found your writing to refreshing! great job!


Posted 12 Months Ago


OH wow I feel dumb because I didn't get it at first lol. I liked this poem and I guess I ddin't read it that way at first. Great poem, I liked it a lot.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I am speechless, this was great.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This was really good, pretty, beautiful (that's the word I'm looking for). The last stanza just makes the whole thing beautiful, really ncie job.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Everyone says he or she is the one, but I dare ask you to inquire the more important question that is so commonly overlooked and rarely addressed: Is there only one? I'm sorry if I went off a little topic here. I know the poems about lol. But the title did raise questions of what love is? For some it's one. A number. For others it has a more significant and universal meaning. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nice work girlie! Blessings! You are on the right path of your life! Flourish!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Great job on the poem it reminded me of my relationship with my grandmother (may God bless her soul). Keep writing and I will definitely keep reviewing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Well done. Keep up the good work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Though I'm not religiuos, it warms my heart to know many find comfort, peace, and acceptance among their religious beliefs; contented. Happiness. And it brings many into this wonderful state of mind that allows them to create a beautiful piece such as this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


with so i must say Amen! This is a real inspiring piece that touches one soul.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Hi, I’m Thrinna! College student here majoring in Journalism! I’ve been writing since 10 years old, mainly screenplays and poems inspired by God, friends, family and love-one. I’m a .. more..

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