The Unspoken Throb

Sometimes, you just can't go back to the past for love when it has been completely forgotten already.

My heart beat fast when you barely came

Being flabbergasted as you spoke my name

You made me remember our poignant past

From the days I left all your shadows cast

 

Why should it happen when it was too late?

Why do I have to see this wicked side of fate?

Our love was lost and it will never be found

A  mischievous case  buried  in the  ground

 

Though you still reside in this heart of mine

My heart and yours by now crossed the line

Dwelling in the past was not a good choice

Yet I hear you weeping in a trembling voice

 

We’ve been in mirth but it’s time to forget

Though  your heart is  full of  callous regret

Things must be spoken ahead the right time

An honest statement will never be a crime

Reviews

[khalid]

wowww, i really cant find words enough to express my admiration of this great poem! i feel i am speechless because no words can deserve to be said about it! that is really great in writing, words picking, and ideas expressing! all i can say...great poem for a great poet as usual!

[Robert Michael Miller J..]

After reading many of your poems, you nice sized vocabulary, and you always tell tales of love so well. Great job! Keep writing :).

[WildSoul]

love your poems! LOVE! LOVE! LOVE!!!

[Blue Lotus]

I like your writing Thrinna.... do give us more :-)

[micayla4]

This has to be my favorite piece of yours. it was just amazing. i wish I had the talent you do.

[Laura Maidah]

First stanza loses steam. The second two are pretty perfect. Nice!

[BLACK PRINCE]

I guess We all should keep it real

[Rhea]

nice poem, beautiful deluge of emotion.

[?]

You're an amazing writer, a master of forms. Please teach me!!!! I love the last line "an honest statement will never be a crime." Honesty is always the best policy :). If you have time review some of my poems.

[Renée J. Martin]

Great subject and expression !
Oh it is a heart breaking shame...life has twist and turns..and we have no manual to go by except the guidance of elders which is lacking sometimes.

[Allen Smuckler]

It IS so important to not only tell people you love them...but that you like them as well...before it is too late. Living in the regretful past, gets nothing accomplished. However, learning from the experience and moving on is often the quickest way to healing..
This was an honest and sincere write about love and love lost.... and as we all know
it is far better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all...
allen