The Unspoken Throb

Sometimes, you just can't go back to the past for love when it has been completely forgotten already.

My heart beat fast when you barely came

Being flabbergasted as you spoke my name

You made me remember our poignant past

From the days I left all your shadows cast

 

Why should it happen when it was too late?

Why do I have to see this wicked side of fate?

Our love was lost and it will never be found

A  mischievous case  buried  in the  ground

 

Though you still reside in this heart of mine

My heart and yours by now crossed the line

Dwelling in the past was not a good choice

Yet I hear you weeping in a trembling voice

 

We’ve been in mirth but it’s time to forget

Though  your heart is  full of  callous regret

Things must be spoken ahead the right time

An honest statement will never be a crime

Reviews

[khalid]

wowww, i really cant find words enough to express my admiration of this great poem! i feel i am speechless because no words can deserve to be said about it! that is really great in writing, words picking, and ideas expressing! all i can say...great poem for a great poet as usual!

[Aidz]

Its been a while so "kewl"

[AK]

Very nice poem! I loved the rhyming scheme and the lesson learnt from it. Keep writing!

[Tai]

That last line, oh gosh, it just echoed long after I finished it. That was a really amazing line, and every word of this came into play perfectly. This was a really lovely poem, keep it up!

[Jed Sabffle]

very well said. :)
yeah.. it is very hard missing an opportunity.....full of regrets..........
this is great, the message is clear.
And i love the rhymes!
Keep wriiting! : )

[Aka_Kitsune]

your right, "An honest statement will never be a crime" great job, i love it

[Geraldine]

This is really great. I so admire the emotions and the rhyming and simply everything. :D Great job. :D

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

lovely last stanza!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A great inspiring piece, well done, good read.

[dillonjensen]

Great poem! The rhyme scheme is perfect and each word compliments the next. Nice job.