Forever in a Minute

Forever in a Minute

A Poem by Jen
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This is a minute poem, 60 syllables, 12 lines, a/a/b/b/c/c/d/d/e/e/f/f, 8/4/4/4/8/4/4/4/8/4/4/4

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Moonlight shines full and its midnight,
his skin glows white,
and she needs him.
More than a whim,
 
with each bell toll, it grows, her want
and yet he can’t.
Now, to kill her
to bend and purr,
 
his teeth break the skin and she moans.
Her life he owns
and she will die.
He never lies.

© 2009 Jen


Author's Note

Jen
Again, I'm not really a poet. Just playing with forms. Be gentle, but please advise. I'm not sure I like this one.

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Jen
Jen

Minneapolis, MN



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I write. Short stories, flash fiction, novels, some poetry. I'm 37, married with 2 children and a cat. I had a short story put up on the Flash Fiction Offensive webzine, Second. And I just release.. more..

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