Visions

Visions

A Poem by Jen
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Acrostic about visions

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Vying for my attention, the black cat slinks
Seeing it there, but not there, I wonder
if seeing cats might be more than a blunder.
Only my heart knows the freedom it brings,
never alone, it can give my heart wings.
So, come little black cat, tell my future.

© 2009 Jen


Author's Note

Jen
Just a silly poem

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Reminds me of this fictional werecat named Solembum.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love acrostics that rhyme and this one is cool. I would suggest another look at the last line to perhaps rhyme it within itself to end with a zing. Just great!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Jen
Jen

Minneapolis, MN



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I write. Short stories, flash fiction, novels, some poetry. I'm 37, married with 2 children and a cat. I had a short story put up on the Flash Fiction Offensive webzine, Second. And I just release.. more..

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