Stiffed

Stiffed

A Poem by Thunderlyrics

 

I can’t believe
I wanted to get with
This Nitwit….
He actin’ like he
Did S***
When all that
Really happened
Was a con artist
…..In action…
His fashion
Had me fascinated
His skin softly
Resonated….
As strong white teeth
…Appreciated…
The delicate meal
Set before his pallet
….But, oh snap!!..
He forgot his wallet…
Droned off about
Leaving it at his office
I tried to
Shake off this
Feeling of being had..
Can’t believe this Negro
Could turn out
Bad…I was mad,
But I held it in..
Contemplatin’
Paying the tab..
But not just yet..
We just met..
This was his idea..
As he dialed a number
Putting his cell to his ear
I could hear
The gentle tones
Of the next female
I mean…How Dare!!!..
But I kept my cool,
Cause Thunder ain’t
Nobody’s fool
I excused myself..
He assumed my destination
Was the powder room..
But I ran into the waiter
Asked him to
Do me a favor
Leave a note for..
The man still seated…
Make sure, I’m gone
Before he reads it..
Exiting the Door,
I heard, “I can’t believe this!!”
I laughed and shook my head
For the note simply said
“When you finish doing the dishes…
Make sure you get that receipt”
 

 

© 2009 Thunderlyrics


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Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha. Wow a memory popped into my head as I read this one and all I can say is make sure you smile when your walking out the door. All have come across that one fool who cant offer a damn thing but sometimes we realize it all too late. Well you just told all those who read this a way to move on and away from those who have nothiong to offer. Great piece.


Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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HA HA HA! This was amazing! Very good imagery. I could picture the whole situation perfectly. Really fantastic poem. I thought it witty and very humorous. Excellent job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha. Wow a memory popped into my head as I read this one and all I can say is make sure you smile when your walking out the door. All have come across that one fool who cant offer a damn thing but sometimes we realize it all too late. Well you just told all those who read this a way to move on and away from those who have nothiong to offer. Great piece.


Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good reading. the realism is very vivid and well expressed.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is the trurth for real! This is one of the best pieces I have read in a min on here. Not for any particular style or how you put your words together, but because of the story you told and how you kept it G in the face of a wanna be "player" and a BALLLERR that is STRUGGGGLING...LQTM (Laughing Quietlt To Myself)

"But I kept my cool,
Cause Thunder ain't
Nobody's fool
I excused myself..
He assumed my destination
Was the powder room..
But I ran into the waiter
Asked him to
Do me a favor
Leave a note for..
The man still seated�
Make sure, I'm gone
Before he reads it..
Exiting the Door,
I heard, "I can't believe this!!"
I laughed and shook my head
For the note simply said
"When you finish doing the dishes�
Make sure you get that receipt" "

Thanks

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Such expressions in this. Can feel every word stated.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem Wow! I would have so done the same thing. Teach that dog some new tricks. Awesome piece I love your style.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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