So what if.....

Just a poem revealing my feelings

 

So what

If life stole my dream

And destroyed my sand castle

Where my confidence and hope dwelt?

So what

If life cheated again

And by hearing my thoughts and prayers

She rearranged my surroundings so I would lose again?

 

So what

If the first lesson life has taught me

Was that dreams don’t come true?

 

So what

If when I was down on the ground,bleeding

Life took away my beloved ones

And left me all alone?

 

So what

If in times of war

Life stood in line with the enemies

And pulled the trigger?

 

So what?

 

So what

If where there was love and trust

Today there’s darkness

And where I bled today I’m numb??

 

I still walk on my feet

So I am not defeated

So what?!

 

And what

If  I teach life the lesson of Love

And I love my enemies

Even if they kill me?

 

And what

If I show life the proof of Strength

And I don't feel alone

Even if the ones I love are all gone?

     I still have God with me…in me…

 

And what

If I give life the example of Consistency

And I  rebuild my sand castle

No matter how many times it may crush down?

 

And what

If I teach life the lesson of Believing

In my thoughts…

In my prayers…

In my dreams…

In myself…

 

 

Mountain of pain

Created by God

To detain my steps

To test my trust

To question my faith

To cut off my lust

Life,you made-up b***h

Full of tricks and tips

Playing with the evil wand of a witch

Master of soul-washing

Mother of heart-dashing

As long as I’m alive

And I walk on my own two feet

With my head up high

You won’t have my dreams

And you won’t crush my trust

Even if you may shift the cards in my stead

I will always be ready for a new game.

Reviews

[DanaRegen]

To start off thanks for enetering this lovely poem into my contest, and best of luck! This was a beautiful poem I liked how it said, "you won't have my dreams and you won't crush my trust" it was really saying to me that you might bring pain to my heart and hurt me on the outside, but I have dreams and you can't crush them. Thanks for sharing!
-Dana :)

[Mz. Rosilyn Vanessa]

This was an amazing piece. Life is funny that way but, Life wasn't created to crush our hopes and dreams. In the beginning life had nothing living to take away. I think we all heard and read: In the beginning.

[Bleeding Ink]

I wish more people had the same sentiments. The turn over of thought was unexpected and enjoyable. I loved the content and attitude. Your talent shows very well in this piece.

[Rain]

This is without question the best piece I've read in a long time. I can't even go into how powerful your words were. This piece was amazing. Rain..