Autumn Approaching

Fiery leaves suddenly appear
autumn is approaching
it's so clear

Geese passing in the chilly blue sky
I feel autumn coming
I hear it in their cry

The sun is shining with cold
Autumn will soon arrive
another year grows old

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

I love autumn, this is a nice poem about that time of the year. Nice pen upon this.

[Forever Mine]

This is very beautiful. It describes the way seasons change from summer to fall perfectly.

-forever mine

[M.Kilani]

great piece, I believe it would go great along with my poem October.
the rhyme scheme is good, the image is great as well.
well done

[Dinesh Sairam]

The last stanza was a perfect descriptive :) I truly thought the rhyme factor could be removed. Rhyme doesn't matter at all. This poem is too good to rhyme. You might re-consider :) Keep writing.

[Shalini Dinesh (Poet's ..]

I like the last stanza much, the last true lines is truth expressed in poetic way, the whole poem is so nice to need, so fresh and lovely..

[Black Cat Fever]

Very beautiful. I can feel autumn after reading this. It's very refreshing.

[Star Wolf]

Awesome! This really has an autumn feel to it! Love it! It's so beautiful it makes me glad fall is almost here.

[Wicahpi]

Autumn is my favorite time of year.
Fiery leaves and all!!

[An owl on the moon]

Autumn is such a vivid wanderer, passing hot summer into chilled, color draped forests.. Here you speak that magic alive for us, and make us feel the season speak. Beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes the fall is coming. The birds are the first sign of the end of summer. The birds flying south to escape the cold. A very good poem. A reminder cold days will be here soon. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote